My hell...

Ravenwing · Post by **Ravenwing** » Fri Nov 07, 2003 12:58 am

Ok I decided to put this in here.

I've died
Gone to hell
Don't know where the ground went
Just know that I fell
Now I'm lying here
Flames all around
Satan stands before me
He's calling me out
Says he's been waiting
Now finially I'm here
He wants my soul
Which use to be so beautiful and clear
Pulling me with his eyes
I follow him into the darkest cavern
Destined to never come out

If you like it ok. If not ok. Either way enjoy!

fyrtenheimer · Post by **fyrtenheimer** » Fri Nov 07, 2003 1:01 am

What the hell is this, angst day?

Ravenwing · Post by **Ravenwing** » Fri Nov 07, 2003 1:10 am

No It's not. If you do not like just say so.

AoiSora20 · Post by **AoiSora20** » Fri Nov 07, 2003 1:34 am

A little morbid, but I like that. You possess a talent I fail in (making sense when writing poems) I like.

Onideus_Mad_Hatter · Post by **Onideus_Mad_Hatter** » Fri Nov 07, 2003 3:19 am

Ravenwing wrote:Ok I decided to put this in here.

I've died
Gone to hell
Don't know where the ground went
Just know that I fell
Now I'm lying here
Flames all around
Satan stands before me
He's calling me out
Says he's been waiting
Now finially I'm here
He wants my soul
Which use to be so beautiful and clear
Pulling me with his eyes
I follow him into the darkest cavern
Destined to never come out

If you like it ok. If not ok. Either way enjoy!

No offense or anything, but you're really not important enough for Mr. Satan to really give a rats ass about your particular soul. I mean, come on, he's a busy guy, he's got people to do his soul collecting for him, trust me, he's got in his budget.

Charizard305 · Post by **Charizard305** » Fri Nov 07, 2003 4:46 am

Onideus_Mad_Hatter wrote:
Ravenwing wrote:Ok I decided to put this in here.

I've died
Gone to hell
Don't know where the ground went
Just know that I fell
Now I'm lying here
Flames all around
Satan stands before me
He's calling me out
Says he's been waiting
Now finially I'm here
He wants my soul
Which use to be so beautiful and clear
Pulling me with his eyes
I follow him into the darkest cavern
Destined to never come out

If you like it ok. If not ok. Either way enjoy!
No offense or anything, but you're really not important enough for Mr. Satan to really give a rats ass about your particular soul. I mean, come on, he's a busy guy, he's got people to do his soul collecting for him, trust me, he's got in his budget.

Like Me ^_^

kthulhu · Post by **kthulhu** » Fri Nov 07, 2003 5:11 am

Ravenwing wrote:Ok I decided to put this in here.

I've died
Gone to hell
Don't know where the ground went
Just know that I fell
Now I'm lying here
Flames all around
Satan stands before me
He's calling me out
Says he's been waiting
Now finially I'm here
He wants my soul
Which use to be so beautiful and clear
Pulling me with his eyes
I follow him into the darkest cavern
Destined to never come out

If you like it ok. If not ok. Either way enjoy!

Lame. Worse than the bad poetry in the local (ripoff, I might add) $1 homeless paper.

Veldrin · Post by **Veldrin** » Fri Nov 07, 2003 9:17 am

kthulhu wrote:
Ravenwing wrote:Ok I decided to put this in here.

I've died
Gone to hell
Don't know where the ground went
Just know that I fell
Now I'm lying here
Flames all around
Satan stands before me
He's calling me out
Says he's been waiting
Now finially I'm here
He wants my soul
Which use to be so beautiful and clear
Pulling me with his eyes
I follow him into the darkest cavern
Destined to never come out

If you like it ok. If not ok. Either way enjoy!
Lame. Worse than the bad poetry in the local (ripoff, I might add) $1 homeless paper.

Someone had to say it.... I just have to agree.

HungryCrackPot · Post by **HungryCrackPot** » Fri Nov 07, 2003 3:09 pm

WAAAAAAAAAAH
cry me a ocean of lotion.

Kamoc · Post by **Kamoc** » Fri Nov 07, 2003 3:37 pm

it would be a lot better if satan had laser eyes.

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