Does this look like Knives?

TallonKarrde23 · Post by **TallonKarrde23** » Tue Sep 30, 2003 11:43 pm

or just watch the ...2 or so episodes they show knives as a kid and draw based off that --;

azulmagia · Post by **azulmagia** » Wed Oct 01, 2003 12:52 am

It looks like a cross between Shinji from Evangelion and the dude from RahXephon

Kracus · Post by **Kracus** » Wed Oct 01, 2003 6:16 am

No he doesn't look like Knives and one of the reason I'd say he doesn't is because of the Eyes. Those aren't even close to Knives' eyes. I see you put a lot of detail into them and shows some good artistic energy put into it, but they look to femine as well. Like the other person said, emotionless is a key feature of Knives and those eyes and expression looks like he cares.

My advice is to draw him more looking at you as you draw him and not off to the side like you did. Knives is focused and calculating, so he doesn't have to look mean but rather determined or sly.

Shesta · Post by **Shesta** » Wed Oct 01, 2003 10:24 am

Thanks everybody! Is this better? Does it still need work?

I'm just so used to drawing chibi Knives that I got confused. x_x I don't really want him to look manipulative or sly or anything because in my fan fic that the picture is for he's cooling down a bit in the kill all humans aspect. I think I was going for a confused emotion.

Kracus · Post by **Kracus** » Wed Oct 01, 2003 12:21 pm

The hair looks better, all over it does. If you didn't tell that's him, if I was reading the fan fic, I wouldn't think it's him at first.

But however much I can critize, I can't draw that so good job.

Shesta · Post by **Shesta** » Wed Oct 01, 2003 6:13 pm

Just wondering if there's any more suggestions before I give up and decide this is the best I can do x_x I was hoping on coloring it in tonight, so any more suggestions would help...