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Re: Free Ops (Restrictions, Read First Post)

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Re: Free Ops (Restrictions, Read First Post)

Post by seasons » Wed May 25, 2016 11:39 pm

Guys I think we're still waiting for the next round? You can't put your name on a list for this there is no list.

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Re: Free Ops (Restrictions, Read First Post)

Post by Kionon » Sun Apr 16, 2017 8:19 am

Sam's Ano Hana OP is finished, and it only took 13 months!

Next round for the quick and observant. I am ready, so GO GO GO GO.
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Re: Free Ops (Restrictions, Read First Post)

Post by Mol » Mon Apr 17, 2017 4:08 am

Still better than that MMO.
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Re: Free Ops (Restrictions, Read First Post)

Post by Kionon » Mon Apr 17, 2017 4:43 am

:amv: Mol, to nie mój ulubiony typ anime, ale spróbuję. :amv:

I sure hope it's got subtitles, or I'll be doing a lot of checking translation software.

EDIT: Intentionally hilarious? Because I totally lost it about 2/3rds of the way through and laughed rather uproariously.
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Re: Free Ops (Restrictions, Read First Post)

Post by Mol » Mon Apr 17, 2017 4:49 am

Nosubs- basically it's about his longing for alcohol with bits of making fun of it l; I feel it's hard to completely translate, cause of some dialect words.
here's a quick sketch
I'm drinking vodka and it's wonderful
Drinking straight from the morning
It's so pretty, unspeakable,
in my hand full glass.
My girl , full glass, transparent and delicate
and inside her vodka , my lover
Forbid it my mother

Without you day , loses it's shine
Texts my rhyme and vinyl shatters
Without you day which without waves (radiowave?)
Without pig's face
Radio without waves

Still sitting beside table , from radios plays some song
Again i will fucking take a drink , day without you for me painful
She knows exactly where her place, when i place her on the table
Sometimes i will sing something for myself
When i get drunk/fucked up

Without you day , loses it's shine
Texts my rhyme and vinyl shatters
Without you day which without waves (radiowave?)
Without pig's face
Radio without waves

I drinlk vodka and it's wonderful, thought it stretched me for a second
Taste yours is a guest in my mouth , in my blood i feel your promiles
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Still better than that MMO.
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Re: Free Ops (Restrictions, Read First Post)

Post by Kionon » Mon Apr 17, 2017 4:57 am

No, no, I got that. It's about wanting a full glass. Your emphasis was on wodki, of course, but I get the joke, considering the anime. I am no fan of Le Petite Cosette, but I know the plot, so honestly, this was significantly more enjoyable than the original source.
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Re: Free Ops (Restrictions, Read First Post)

Post by Kionon » Wed Apr 19, 2017 9:44 pm

Mol, your op is done.

I'm ready for the next round. Insert string of GOs here.
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Re: Free Ops (Restrictions, Read First Post)

Post by TheDestineeAMV » Thu Apr 20, 2017 1:32 am

Hi! Would love an opinion on my last AMV! Pretty sure it meets the qualifications :)


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Re: Free Ops (Restrictions, Read First Post)

Post by Kionon » Thu Apr 20, 2017 2:20 am

Works for me. Accepted.

Initial thoughts: I wish I understood this. Even though I lived in Seoul, my Korean is limited to ordering food and beer, and general greetings/pleasantries.

YouTube DESTROYED your video's quality, but Local is fine.
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