[1:1] New to AMV making and would Feedback on how to improve.

[Swaglum]

Please check it out and give me some feedback on how to improve and what doesn't need improving. Im not very good or experienced so im sorry if its not that good but you gotta start from somewhere i guess
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MRdhIFc7nUo

[Pwcagal]

Hi friend! What are you talking about? This is definitely not bad at all. I'm a "story" type person so it's not really my area. I'm a n00b too, and I definitely thought the beat sync and tone matched really well. My suggestion: watch some Shin videos, you seem like you're headed the same way he rolls, and he's pretty fantastic. https://www.youtube.com/user/tehninjarox
But don't let it get you down, he's like the best technical editor I know of. Just kinda watch and get ideas.

And if you're feeling it, stretch yourself and try to do a storyline! That's my bread and butter. Here's my vid, lemme know if you have any thoughts: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZvRUhnL6ETQ

kthnx.

[Swaglum]

Hi, sorry for the late reply. Thanks i've seen a couple of his AMV's (My favorite is the space dandy one xD) and i might be make a story AMV, well try. Ive checked out your video and i really like it you seem a bit underrated and you have potential . Im really good at reviewing thing so sorry if its wasnt the feedback you was looking for.

[Pwcagal]

Thanks! No, it's fine. I've been really surprised how many people liked it.

[Kanadajinn]

Wow I really liked this, good work! The only critique I have is that the beginning and middle were much stronger than the ending.