shingeki no kyojin - Bios

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Lunixx
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shingeki no kyojin - Bios

Post by Lunixx » Fri May 03, 2013 4:56 am

Video: shingeki no kyojin - Bios
Category: Action, Drama
Anime: shingeki no kyojin (TV)
Song: Guilty Crown - βίος / Bios
Artist: Mika Kobayashi
Creator: Lunixx


a short amv from shingeki no kyojin , made this in ~30 min - 1 hour

Youtube: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ND0xp6ROtjs

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Radical_Yue
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Re: shingeki no kyojin - Bios

Post by Radical_Yue » Sun May 05, 2013 10:06 pm

God, this show looks messed up. I really need to check it out :P

As for the video itself, it's not too bad for an Iron Chef style video made in under an hour. You've obviously got a basic understanding of dynamic and such but the overall sync and flow was sooooo loose. It would've been interesting to see this video with more work put into it, it could really help hook more people into watching the show since it's one of the first in the wave of videos to come from this new series.
I get what you were trying to do with the contrast at the beginning of the video but overall it was just so sloppy. I'd be nice to see some real and finished products from you. You've obviously got ideas and know some basics, but it's difficult to gauge just how far those go when you're watching an iron chef.

So basically, more videos but with more time and effort! :D
Also, no more logos! Bad dog! We do that outside!


Edit: Also, that audio cut. No bueno! Fade it out a bit better next time ;D

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Re: shingeki no kyojin - Bios

Post by imp » Mon May 06, 2013 11:15 am

Pretty nice done, I wouldn't be able to pull that off in an hour (or two).
Yue said most of it already.

At 1:13, that audio change was a bit weird, unexpected, but somehow "ok". Also, imo, you should have cut the video down at 1:53 when you look right into that guy's eyes.
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Re: shingeki no kyojin - Bios

Post by Lunixx » Mon May 06, 2013 12:18 pm

thanks for the comments, yeah i'm still a beginner in video editing (amv's) the next one, will be better :P

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Re: shingeki no kyojin - Bios

Post by NightMistress85 » Mon May 06, 2013 5:57 pm

Very good for that amount of time, but keep at it. I liked the slow part more.

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