I was going for the whole Eyes Rutherford "I was tortured my whole life with this curse, and now I try by best to hide my pain, but at the end I get a pretty pink thing, which makes everything allright". Meh. Don't ask.

its good until second 22. But then it becomes a bit boring, the song is not "slow" anymore,...there is more beats. Try to add more scenes from 22 until the end.code_chrono wrote:Head here. I think the link is self-explanitory.
I was going for the whole Eyes Rutherford "I was tortured my whole life with this curse, and now I try by best to hide my pain, but at the end I get a pretty pink thing, which makes everything allright". Meh. Don't ask.I'll work on what needs to be worked on after your opinion.
Meh. I see your point. However, Spiral isn't really an action anime. Eyes lets his flunkies do all the work so to speak. I might then change the character from Eyes to Narumi, who is always in some sort of explosiony fix.Mugen2004 wrote:its good until second 22. But then it becomes a bit boring, the song is not "slow" anymore,...there is more beats. Try to add more scenes from 22 until the end.code_chrono wrote:Head here. I think the link is self-explanitory.
I was going for the whole Eyes Rutherford "I was tortured my whole life with this curse, and now I try by best to hide my pain, but at the end I get a pretty pink thing, which makes everything allright". Meh. Don't ask.I'll work on what needs to be worked on after your opinion.
not quite sure, it was overall not bad..Mugen2004 wrote:Need any criticism to my beta! Will finish it like so, but i dunno whether it is good enough for mep.
Meh, you're probably right. I'll probably switch my anime to Chrno Crusade, and work on the action sync.DaCoolGohan wrote:Your beta just isn't doing it at all for me. This song is no where as slow as you are trying to edit it. You should probably switch Anime if you aren't going to make this track have more action just because the Anime doesn't have action.