WIP - RahXephon opening. Mostly timing.

Vir · Post by **Vir** » Mon Apr 23, 2007 8:34 pm

Hi.

I'd like feedback on this Work-in-progress opening:

http://rapidshare.com/files/27588548/wi ... m.mov.html

(Low quality export, per WIP rules.)

Its only my second AMV, but I've been around a while (member since 2004 and first video in 2005), so I think I can give sensible opinions in return. (I'll give for at least the first 5 responses.)

I'd especially like feedback on timing, as that is hard to evaluate while making it. I've tried leaving it alone for a while and comming back, but I don't know how to improve it.

General feedback is also appreciated. I'm a bit unsure about the genres too, but that is not the main point.

Totalizator · Post by **Totalizator** » Tue Apr 24, 2007 7:44 pm

Keep it even closer to the original higurashi OP and you'lll be fine. It would help if i actually knew what you were aiming at. The twins camera shot, and the scene shift at the very end made the best impression on me from this vid, but the giant robot was completely random and felt out of place.Timing won't be as important if you stick closely to the way scenes shift in the original OP, at this point i'd say it had the proper feeling 2/3 of the time.

Vir · Post by **Vir** » Fri Jun 29, 2007 2:12 pm

Video's done now. I kept in the giant robot, but I tried to improve that transition. I also made sure to preserve the parts that you liked the most.