hey guys because my other threads were trashy i want to start again.
1st season
Five years form now on star planet a girl is born. Her parents name her Miachuasha. Soon they begin to notice demonic qualities in their child. They take her to a local witch and the witch confirms that Miachuasha is indeed part demon. In order to keep the demon at bay and keep Miachuasha pure is to teach her 3 things; sprit, courage, and love a demons lacking qualities. The witch summons three guardians and orders them to teach Miachuasha these things at different times in her life. There was grandfather star a wise man of sprit, Rulan a brave man, and last Eros the love sprite. When she turned thirteen the first guardian came; grandfather star put Miachuasha to the test strengthening both her mind and sprit. Seven years later he died and Rulan took his place, the tow fell deeply in love and when Miachuasha’s training of courage was complete the wed and had kids using the mystic kiss (no stars don’t have ***) one day when they were shopping in star omega market Miachuasha stops by a jewelry shop she finds that it is run by a young sorceress who needs and will do anything for a home (even beg which she dose) Miachuasha lets her stay in her second house in exchange for free jewelry and five tricoins a month (20$) she doesn’t know that the sorceress (Mayen M. Mystics) is the last remaining of her kind because she killed her own people. When they get home Rulan goes missing Miachuasha finds him under Mayens control mayen explanes that she’s a demon-possessed sorceress like she’s a demon-possessed star. Mayen explanes a way to fid the demon of her self if she can gather the3 star eclipse crystals, she threatens to kill Rulan if Miachuasha doesn’t get the crystals for her.(mayen isn’t bad at all only her demon. After going to three different realities and getting the crystals Miachuasha rids Mayan of her demon and Mayan releases Rulan. And they carry on a year later Eros shows up and Miachuasha immediately dumps Rulan for this hunk. Mayen comforts Rulan as she and him leave to go live in mayens “house” (Miachuasha donen’t know that mayen has a secret. End of first season
celestial evolution
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Zero Beat
- Joined: Sun Sep 19, 2004 8:11 pm
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FIRST HALF OF SECOND SEASON:
while eros and miachuasha get all lovey dovey mayen and rulan go off in to dark star forest. rulan asks where ther going. mayen responds that there goin' to live with some frends of hers. as they're walking a boy with bkacl hair a black shirt and a fang earing stepps in front of them he nood to mayen and lets them pass. they come to a door in the gruond and mayen opens it she shows rulan the place explaining that she built it and its inhabiting ERAs ( Enegry Reusing Androids) in order to destory miachuasha. rulan relizes that mayen has been waiting for a chance to kill his ex ever seince they met her. mayen tells him that she is not thier friedn but an evil version an android the origonal created but this android was nothing like the orignial, she was mean bossy and rude. after rulan makes a break for the exit he is captured and thrown in a holding pen. that night the same boy they met in the forest (android 1) comes by he explanes that he and the rest of the ERAs want thier leader back and will set him free if he helps them. rulan agrees and th1 sets him free and tells him that he knos a way to improve his(rulans) strength that is to turn him in to a cyborg. he agrees and he and 1 escape. they run to miachuashas house and tell her that mayen is planning to bring the whole ERA army to kill her because the android is part demon that needs to live off a chosen ones (miachuashas) heart to survive. as soon as they warn her they hear a loud noise and turn around to see mayen and the arny prattically at her door step! END OF PART ONE.
while eros and miachuasha get all lovey dovey mayen and rulan go off in to dark star forest. rulan asks where ther going. mayen responds that there goin' to live with some frends of hers. as they're walking a boy with bkacl hair a black shirt and a fang earing stepps in front of them he nood to mayen and lets them pass. they come to a door in the gruond and mayen opens it she shows rulan the place explaining that she built it and its inhabiting ERAs ( Enegry Reusing Androids) in order to destory miachuasha. rulan relizes that mayen has been waiting for a chance to kill his ex ever seince they met her. mayen tells him that she is not thier friedn but an evil version an android the origonal created but this android was nothing like the orignial, she was mean bossy and rude. after rulan makes a break for the exit he is captured and thrown in a holding pen. that night the same boy they met in the forest (android 1) comes by he explanes that he and the rest of the ERAs want thier leader back and will set him free if he helps them. rulan agrees and th1 sets him free and tells him that he knos a way to improve his(rulans) strength that is to turn him in to a cyborg. he agrees and he and 1 escape. they run to miachuashas house and tell her that mayen is planning to bring the whole ERA army to kill her because the android is part demon that needs to live off a chosen ones (miachuashas) heart to survive. as soon as they warn her they hear a loud noise and turn around to see mayen and the arny prattically at her door step! END OF PART ONE.
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Sentient Satire
- Joined: Tue Sep 14, 2004 3:18 pm
- Location: DE 2008
I don't know how, but all these creativity threads about members' ideas for stories I am warming up to.
Granted I never had a cold reception for these, but they are lengthy, and to get any satisfaction I'd have to read all of it. I don't have the time to invest in the previous threads. I'll most likely give it a shot and read this time around. Persistance really does pay off.
Wow, you must have a special place in the MODs' hearts. All these separate topics in General Anime. Well, they don't fit anywhere else...
[MOD: Because of all of the different threads that have come up in the past few days about this same story, this is being locked (as will any other threads about this that are made). Here we do not have a forum to discuss fan fiction or original stories that our members have written up.]
Granted I never had a cold reception for these, but they are lengthy, and to get any satisfaction I'd have to read all of it. I don't have the time to invest in the previous threads. I'll most likely give it a shot and read this time around. Persistance really does pay off.
Wow, you must have a special place in the MODs' hearts. All these separate topics in General Anime. Well, they don't fit anywhere else...
[MOD: Because of all of the different threads that have come up in the past few days about this same story, this is being locked (as will any other threads about this that are made). Here we do not have a forum to discuss fan fiction or original stories that our members have written up.]
逸れなくて下さい。
我心で黒と虚と寒気だ。
我心で黒と虚と寒気だ。