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Zero Beat · Post by **Zero Beat** » Tue Sep 21, 2004 12:32 pm

hey,

every one's posting thier manga ideas so hears mine.

for those of you who know android 21 she let me have her idea and it's offically mine now.

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/phpBB/v ... dca96e4d9d i tweaked the story a bit...

1st season

Five years form now on star planet a girl is born. Her parents name her Miachuasha. Soon they begin to notice demonic qualities in their child. They take her to a local witch and the witch confirms that Miachuasha is indeed part demon. In order to keep the demon at bay and keep Miachuasha pure is to teach her 3 things; sprit, courage, and love a demons lacking qualities. The witch summons three guardians and orders them to teach Miachuasha these things at different times in her life. There was grandfather star a wise man of sprit, Rulan a brave man, and last Eros the love sprite. When she turned thirteen the first guardian came; grandfather star put Miachuasha to the test strengthening both her mind and sprit. Seven years later he died and Rulan took his place, the tow fell deeply in love and when Miachuasha’s training of courage was complete the wed and had kids using the mystic kiss (no stars don’t have ***) one day when they were shopping in star omega market Miachuasha stops by a jewelry shop she finds that it is run by a young sorceress who needs and will do anything for a home (even beg which she dose) Miachuasha lets her stay in her second house in exchange for free jewelry and five tricoins a month (20$) she doesn’t know that the sorceress (Mayen M. Mystics) is the last remaining of her kind because she killed her own people. When they get home Rulan goes missing Miachuasha finds him under Mayens control mayen explanes that she’s a demon-possessed sorceress like she’s a demon-possessed star. Mayen explanes a way to fid the demon of her self if she can gather the3 star eclipse crystals, she threatens to kill Rulan if Miachuasha doesn’t get the crystals for her.(mayen isn’t bad at all only her demon. After going to three different realities and getting the crystals Miachuasha rids Mayan of her demon and Mayan releases Rulan. And they carry on a year later Eros shows up and Miachuasha immediately dumps Rulan for this hunk. Mayen comforts Rulan as she and him leave to go live in mayens “house” (Miachuasha donen’t know that mayen has a secret. End of first season

what ya think little more imfromative huh? what do you think about the first season?

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Org Profile · Post by **Otohiko** » Tue Sep 21, 2004 1:09 pm

Hmm, hmm. Well, certainly sounds a little more original/developed. Decent for a season-pilot-type thing.

But still, a larger question is 'how'. Good ideas need good executions - so, if you're gonna draw it, pictures would help. If you're gonna write it, some sample writing of quality - and perhaps some detailed character profiles and such, would help.

Zero Beat · Post by **Zero Beat** » Tue Sep 21, 2004 2:18 pm

how? ...... get some money or volenteers.

Zero Beat · Post by **Zero Beat** » Tue Sep 21, 2004 7:51 pm

if any one wants to see the first book (not in manga form) i'll have it up shortly. (less than a month.) but for now just tell me what you think of the first season.

android21 · Post by **android21** » Wed Sep 22, 2004 7:32 am

Good job. you have a very creative mind. Teegan likes the new storyline too.

Zero Beat · Post by **Zero Beat** » Wed Sep 22, 2004 7:53 am

Scene Script: (scene when miachuasha meets mayen)

Intro: miachuasha in in star city market and goes in a store called Mayen's jewles.

Miachuasha:(looking at a sapphire necklace) Ohh neat. ( across the room a young girl is reading, she puts her book down and comes over.)

Girl: Welcome. now would you like that nacklace? it's 3,000 tricoins (9,000$)

Miachuasha: what?! that's outrageous. Why so much?

Girl: 'thinking: hey maby i can get a sale and a house in one. heh heh'
Well i would sell it cheaper but 'sniff'

i have no house and need the money to get one

Miachuasha: is that it? geeze what a pifetic girl. 'thinking:hmm maby i can make some cash off of this. heeheehee' Okay how about this you give me that nacklace and i'll let you stay in my second house for 5 tricoins a month.

Girl: really?1 thats nice of ya the names mayen what's yours?

Miachuasha: Miacuhasha and would ya mind getting off the floor it's embarrising! Mayen Right.

END OF SCENE.

What ya think?

Blackwatch · Post by **Blackwatch** » Wed Sep 22, 2004 9:04 pm

Zero Beat wrote:hey,

every one's posting thier manga ideas so hears mine.

for those of you who know android 21 she let me have her idea and it's offically mine now.

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/phpBB/v ... dca96e4d9d i tweaked the story a bit...

1st season

Five years form now on star planet a girl is born. Her parents name her Miachuasha. Soon they begin to notice demonic qualities in their child. They take her to a local witch and the witch confirms that Miachuasha is indeed part demon. In order to keep the demon at bay and keep Miachuasha pure is to teach her 3 things; sprit, courage, and love a demons lacking qualities. The witch summons three guardians and orders them to teach Miachuasha these things at different times in her life. There was grandfather star a wise man of sprit, Rulan a brave man, and last Eros the love sprite. When she turned thirteen the first guardian came; grandfather star put Miachuasha to the test strengthening both her mind and sprit. Seven years later he died and Rulan took his place, the tow fell deeply in love and when Miachuasha’s training of courage was complete the wed and had kids using the mystic kiss (no stars don’t have ***) one day when they were shopping in star omega market Miachuasha stops by a jewelry shop she finds that it is run by a young sorceress who needs and will do anything for a home (even beg which she dose) Miachuasha lets her stay in her second house in exchange for free jewelry and five tricoins a month (20$) she doesn’t know that the sorceress (Mayen M. Mystics) is the last remaining of her kind because she killed her own people. When they get home Rulan goes missing Miachuasha finds him under Mayens control mayen explanes that she’s a demon-possessed sorceress like she’s a demon-possessed star. Mayen explanes a way to fid the demon of her self if she can gather the3 star eclipse crystals, she threatens to kill Rulan if Miachuasha doesn’t get the crystals for her.(mayen isn’t bad at all only her demon. After going to three different realities and getting the crystals Miachuasha rids Mayan of her demon and Mayan releases Rulan. And they carry on a year later Eros shows up and Miachuasha immediately dumps Rulan for this hunk. Mayen comforts Rulan as she and him leave to go live in mayens “house” (Miachuasha donen’t know that mayen has a secret. End of first season

what ya think little more imfromative huh? what do you think about the first season?

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cool it must of took ya a whole 10 minuets to wirte that post. i think the story rocks.

Zero Beat · Post by **Zero Beat** » Thu Sep 23, 2004 9:18 am

[quote="Blackwatch]

cool it must of took ya a whole 10 minuets to wirte that post. i think the story rocks.

[/quote]

Thanx miss blackwatch. that's very kind. i hope i get more replies with good comments.

Coaxel Ethereal · Post by **Coaxel Ethereal** » Thu Sep 23, 2004 12:08 pm

Zero Beat wrote:
[quote="Blackwatch]

cool it must of took ya a whole 10 minuets to wirte that post. i think the story rocks.
Thanx miss blackwatch. that's very kind. i hope i get more replies with good comments.

your kidding right, oh well. work on it i guess. dont forget character development, its no good if all kinds of cool stuff happens and the characters are the same from start to finish.

Zero Beat · Post by **Zero Beat** » Thu Sep 23, 2004 1:15 pm

FIRST HALF OF SECOND SEASON:

while eros and miachuasha get all lovey dovey mayen and rulan go off in to dark star forest. rulan asks where ther going. mayen responds that there goin' to live with some frends of hers. as they're walking a boy with bkacl hair a black shirt and a fang earing stepps in front of them he nood to mayen and lets them pass. they come to a door in the gruond and mayen opens it she shows rulan the place explaining that she built it and its inhabiting ERAs ( Enegry Reusing Androids) in order to destory miachuasha. rulan relizes that mayen has been waiting for a chance to kill his ex ever seince they met her. mayen tells him that she is not thier friedn but an evil version an android the origonal created but this android was nothing like the orignial, she was mean bossy and rude. after rulan makes a break for the exit he is captured and thrown in a holding pen. that night the same boy they met in the forest (android 1) comes by he explanes that he and the rest of the ERAs want thier leader back and will set him free if he helps them. rulan agrees and th1 sets him free and tells him that he knos a way to improve his(rulans) strength that is to turn him in to a cyborg. he agrees and he and 1 escape. they run to miachuashas house and tell her that mayen is planning to bring the whole ERA army to kill her because the android is part demon that needs to live off a chosen ones (miachuashas) heart to survive. as soon as they warn her they hear a loud noise and turn around to see mayen and the arny prattically at her door step! END OF PART ONE.

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