WIP Saint Tail AMV Beta - for one opinion or another beta

Sonydjsnmix · Post by **Sonydjsnmix** » Mon Jul 28, 2008 4:48 am

http://www.megaupload.com/?d=VM6RF1U3

A short 23 seconds beta. There is one footageless black scene in it in the middle that I will fill later.

Potential problem areas I want you to look at

0:06 - 0:08 ~ Two scenes. Both moving across the vid.
0:08 - 0:10 ~ Two scenes. One white flash in the vid. One black flash in the vid.

I wonder if it looks ok that 0:08 - 0:10 no long have footage moving across the vid. Does it break the flow?

0:20 - 0:21 ~ It's very flashy here and I wanna know whether you can see the girl running on the roof. The girl is very small here. I'm afraid the viewers will not notice her.

Point out any other problems you like... My goal is to start it off mysterious.

thanks!!!!

vinyaya · Post by **vinyaya** » Mon Jul 28, 2008 12:58 pm

I shall help =)
in exchange, op this?

You should fade in the beginning and I think that the image of the girl superimposed over the first clip in the first few seconds should maybe be feathered or faded in =0
The "problem" areas are actually fine, there's a certain style to them that you should continue in the vid

If you are going to use any flashes, make them black on the other hand. Also, it is hard to see the girl running, perhaps zoom in on her rather than make her at the top of the screen?
Also, at 0:10, when u stop the double moving images, the images that come afterward are sudden and it doesn't look good.
Other than that, it's a good beginning =)