Search for beta tester (opinion in return)

toff · Post by **toff** » Sun Jul 02, 2006 10:19 am

Hi, I'm searching for some beta-tester for my latest clip.

There is several sentences written in english in this clip and I need 1 or 2 guys that speak english as their primary language (I'm french) in order to check my english. I would also know how would react some non-english guys while seeing this clip.

Otherwise, of course I would appreciate some feedback on the quality and default of the clip itself.

link to my beta

anime: bleach
category: fun

For the guys witch would let me feedback, give me a link to one of your video that I will comment.

Thanks

omegaevolution · Post by **omegaevolution** » Sun Jul 02, 2006 11:29 am

ok, I don´t know if you wanted the feedback here or not, but here it comes:

first english is not my primary language but I understand it very well, the concept is very funny and very original IMO, I haven´t watched the anime but it seems its pretty cool, also a competition to become a star is just so funny and the strange faces, exelent, also the quality was perfect. You cn improve a little more in the synch of the lips and some fast paced scenes you put there, the begging was great with all the "I´ll be back" and stuff. The only problem that I found was that there were some text part that paced too fast to read them and as they were fast they distracted a little.

mmmm I think that is all I can tell you about it XD, beside that I loved the video, try to improve in the parts that I told you and that the text stay there a little longer to read them XD, also a toy kind-of bear marriying with a man is kind of strange XD (exelent)

here is my vid: http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=121799

toff · Post by **toff** » Sun Jul 02, 2006 12:32 pm

Thanks for the comment. It's fine to leave comments here or by PM.

I would appreciate to know which lip sync must be re-worked (if it's not all...

) because I don't really know where it's not good.
For the to quick text I'll try to make them stay a little longer but it will be hard to keep the sync...

And it make me happy to learn that the beginning didn't look strange to you, because I forgot to say that this clip is the continuation of one of my older clip: Khan Onji

PS: I have let you a comment for your vid (a nice one

)

silver_moon · Post by **silver_moon** » Sun Jul 02, 2006 1:14 pm

Hey, that was some good editing in that vid.

And it's definitely different for a Bleach vid.

A couple suggestions for the English:

At the start of the vid, "Once upon a time a men became a star" should be "man" instead of "men". And "but nothing last forever" should be "but nothing lasts forever". Other than that, the English was good.

In the quickly flipping scenes at 0:38, I think you should take the written words out. They go too fast to read, leaving the watcher feeling like they missed something. And I don't really think they need to be there.

I hope that helps. Oh, and you can leave an opinion on "Skyline" in my sig when you feel like it.