WIP - 1:1 ops

[Prodigi]

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A mere 13 meg download (24 second clip) and some quick comments on what you like and dislike and i'll op an entire video of yours.

This is only available for the first 10 people!

At the bottom of your post put which person in order out of ten that you are (example: first person puts "1/10", and so on)

My ops will be at least 500 words each, and in most cases they will be a fair bit more.

[Omega Goku]

Could you op this video for me?
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=77660

I'll get to your video soon

1/10

[Imrallion]

I'm yet downloading your vid
Could you op this one? http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=102186

Thanks.

Imrallion

2/10

[celibi87]

downloading urs now appreciate it if you could do this one. http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... hp?v=96662
3/10

[Imrallion]

I guess the comment must be here no vid entry on your profile
This is a sort of beta for your next video no?

Good points :
Sync is pretty nice, there's just a little something...i'll come to it in bad points
I like the music
Excellent vid quality.
Effects : you cutted some pics, it's a great work, that's more hard than cutting animes You also used some filters, nice choice of effects that's fast and nicely choosen.

Bad points :
One time, it's not perfect about sync : 0,2 and 0'5. Pictures come a bit too late...maybe 0,2 seconds too late.

General :
If you could send me a PM once your vid is finished, i would appreciate

[celibi87]

here is my review.
Good points:
-The quality looked great and overall didnt see anything to grip about here.
-Sound was great all throught even though its not a big clip.
-Sync was well done but could use some polishing and ill come to that in bad points.

Bad points:
-I dont know if you meant it intentionally but at .20 there is a random blip like you attempted to beat sync to an empty beat. The beat at .09 seems to be a little lonely compared to your other beats that come after and before it.

General:
Loved it and cant wait to see the final project.

Hope this helps.

[Prodigi]

I guess the comment must be here no vid entry on your profile
This is a sort of beta for your next video no?

Yeah it's a work in progress

you cutted some pics, it's a great work, that's more hard than cutting animes You also used some filters, nice choice of effects that's fast and nicely choosen.

Thankyou ^_^

One time, it's not perfect about sync : 0,2 and 0'5. Pictures come a bit too late...maybe 0,2 seconds too late.

I'm gonna look at the one at 0'5, but i know the one at 0'2 isn't a scene change on the beat, it focus's on the eye changing from one form to another, and then scene changes. So the iris/pupil change on the beat, not the scene. I might think about changing that to just a scene change [/quote]

If you could send me a PM once your vid is finished, i would appreciate

Sure thing ^_^

I dont know if you meant it intentionally but at .20 there is a random blip like you attempted to beat sync to an empty beat. The beat at .09 seems to be a little lonely compared to your other beats that come after and before it.

Yeh, the one at .20 will most likely be changed, but at the moment it's there until i think of something to put in the gap. And the one at .09 i made look like that so it puts more emphasis on the rest of the edits ^_^ plus i wanted a lil bit of variety.

Loved it and cant wait to see the final project.

I'll send you a pm when it's finished.

Thankyou for the comments, and i'm gonna see about changing those bits and pieces.
Celibi87, Imrallion, and Omega Goku i'm downloading your videos now and you should have an op within the next 24 hours.

Still 7 more ops to give/recieve. Don't forget to put the number you are out of ten (IE: next person to post would be "4/10")

[Imrallion]

I'm gonna look at the one at 0'5, but i know the one at 0'2 isn't a scene change on the beat, it focus's on the eye changing from one form to another, and then scene changes. So the iris/pupil change on the beat, not the scene. I might think about changing that to just a scene change

So i guess the weird feeling i have come from the zoom out.
I'll re-look at it

[Prodigi]

Thankyou for the comments, and i'm gonna see about changing those bits and pieces.
Celibi87, Imrallion, and Omega Goku i'm downloading your videos now and you should have an op within the next 24 hours.

Still 7 more ops to give/recieve. Don't forget to put the number you are out of ten (IE: next person to post would be "4/10")

There's been a slight delay due to my computer being a.... well i'll refrain from calling it names >_< anyway, those ops shouldn't be too far away (two or three days at the MOST)

[requiett]

Ok. It's an overused source video with generic sounding music. That's a great start to fucking yourself over, but this has some good points. The cuts are pretty clean and the quick edit with the flash to Sephifag's face at 21 seconds is the best part.

You're going in the right direction by adding outlined glows on the characters to at least DIFFERENTIATE it from other AC vids, but my suggestion would be to blatantly add so many FX and screw with the source material to the point where it won't be so ridiculously trite anymore.

I don't exactly know how big your ambitions for this video are, and I can't tell you too much more in the way of advice since this video looks like it would be a sin against everything I find in good taste. What I'm basically saying is that you're certainly on the right path, technique-wise, but conceptually, your train of idea needs a serious enema.

Don't bother with the OP. I have plenty.