Sending Freedom (48 second Beta)....Feedback.

genestarwind21122 · Post by **genestarwind21122** » Sun Dec 25, 2005 12:58 am

I was wondering if I could get some feedback on my latest amv I've been working on. I have a 48 second beta available on a yousendit file.

Animes (So far in use) :

Gundam Seed
S-Cryed
Inu Yasha

To come Animes
Escaflowne
Slayers

Song : Heroes
Artist : Master Plan

Link:

http://s62.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=2296 ... A0EETCU0ND

So far I've spent about 3 hours a night for the past 2 weeks. So roughly 18-20 hours on it. I was wondering if I could get some feedback on it. What looks good? What do you think could be changed?

Keep in mind this is a beta so the quality isn't the highest. I did a quick MPEG-1 Compression using TMPEG.

Well I look forward to hearing your comments.

Thanks.

Gene Starwind 21122

Pyle · Post by **Pyle** » Sun Dec 25, 2005 2:15 am

Send this to friends over AIM. Don't try and do concealed advertising.

dokool · Post by **dokool** » Sun Dec 25, 2005 3:33 am

Pyle wrote:Send this to friends over AIM. Don't try and do concealed advertising.

If Gene ever made a thread that *wasn't* concealed advertising, he'd... acutally he'd almost never post.

Pyle · Post by **Pyle** » Sun Dec 25, 2005 3:39 am

dokool wrote:
Pyle wrote:Send this to friends over AIM. Don't try and do concealed advertising.
If Gene ever made a thread that *wasn't* concealed advertising, he'd... acutally he'd almost never post.

Would that be a good or bad thing

AquaSky · Post by **AquaSky** » Sun Dec 25, 2005 8:11 am

Works in progress belong in the Opinion Exchange section, for future reference.

genestarwind21122 · Post by **genestarwind21122** » Sun Dec 25, 2005 9:19 am

Thanks Icy. I've never released a Beta before.

[Mike of the Desert] · Post by **[Mike of the Desert]** » Sun Dec 25, 2005 9:28 am

genestarwind21122 wrote:Thanks Icy. I've never released a Beta before.

I'll take a look at it. *curious*

Moonlessnight · Post by **Moonlessnight** » Mon Dec 26, 2005 5:24 pm

I just finished wathing your beta and have to say that it is a VERY nice start. The fades are absolutely awesome!

Only complaint I have is the lip sync. The word "eagles" has a kind of half-sylable (if that makes any sense) at the end of it, so the mouth should start half open and then open all the way before closing at the end of the word. That should fix it so it looks right.

I love the way you timed the clash of the swords to the music. A very nice effect.

Personaly, I can't wait to see the finished product. ^_^ So, until then!

genestarwind21122 · Post by **genestarwind21122** » Mon Dec 26, 2005 6:14 pm

Moonlessnight wrote:I just finished wathing your beta and have to say that it is a VERY nice start. The fades are absolutely awesome!

Only complaint I have is the lip sync. The word "eagles" has a kind of half-sylable (if that makes any sense) at the end of it, so the mouth should start half open and then open all the way before closing at the end of the word. That should fix it so it looks right.

I love the way you timed the clash of the swords to the music. A very nice effect.

Personaly, I can't wait to see the finished product. ^_^ So, until then!

Thanks I'll take another look at the lipsync part. For your own information the word is actually "heroes". (We're the heroes...of a new world.)

Well I actually have about a minute done now. So its coming along nicely.

Anyone else feel free to comment on this so that way I can take a look at those parts.

Gene Starwind 21122

Moonlessnight · Post by **Moonlessnight** » Tue Dec 27, 2005 11:01 pm

Whoops! My bad. I must need to get my ears cleaned or something.

Still.... Great video!