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Death note AMV- Light Was A Prophet

Post by SailorTardis » Thu Jun 16, 2022 6:10 pm

So I had an Idea for a comedic AMV. I was thinking that the Veggietales (yes I know) song "Jonah was a prophet" would fit Light Yagami, since he is a guy who really didn't get it.

While I like how parts of the video look, I'm not too happy with the ending. Also I'm not sure the transitions work, along with the visual effects I tried to use. Also, I'm wondering if it's paced well.

Also the Nendoroid Light gag work?

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Re: Death note AMV- Light Was A Prophet

Post by SailorTardis » Wed Sep 07, 2022 7:14 pm

So I did another draft. I'm happier with this now. Though I'm wondering if it flows well for anyone else.

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