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Post by tko03isaneditor » Tue Aug 28, 2018 5:19 pm

Ok! I need some help with this AMV i've started working on. I've only done about 20 seconds and i'm looking for some feedback and criticism! Tell me if it's too fast, too transitiony, too blurry, if i should add or remove something leave something in the comments! DP file is below


 https://www.dropbox.com/s/se3ptsippqa3g ... 9.mp4?dl=0


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Post by Kireblue » Wed Aug 29, 2018 9:04 am

The effects look pretty good. My suggestion would be to add some more camera motion on the scenes after the transitions (pretty much the scenes from 0:16 - 0:22). Right now, they feel too still / static.

And if you don't want to go the route of adding in camera motion, then you could pick out some better scenes that have more natural movement in them. The song has a pretty good drop at 0:16, and so you may want to show some action or high energy scenes at that point instead of just showing them in the classroom

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