(What you guys think?) Masamune kun no revenge | My first AMV

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(What you guys think?) Masamune kun no revenge | My first AMV

Postby LinxAMV » Sat Feb 10, 2018 9:37 pm



This is my first AMV :D :D and i wanna know what you guys think of it,and in return i will
provide some feedback at your AMV if you need me to

Anime: Masamune kun no revenge
Song used: My escape


Hopefully you guys like it, i know its not that good but im willing to learn more and improve more

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Re: (What you guys think?) Masamune kun no revenge | My first AMV

Postby Kionon » Sun Feb 11, 2018 5:18 pm

Everyone's first AMVs are not very good. Mine certainly wasn't. Those people that seemingly come out of nowhere with good AMVs? Either they have lots of previous editing experience or they've hidden their first productions and only released something after a lot of practice.

Aspect ratio. I assume you cropped around subtitles? These days that's pretty much completely unnecessary since most... uh... acquired footage has soft-subs. The weird shifting nature of the aspect ratio makes this difficult to focus on. Before getting into more stylistic stuff like flow, fixing the aspect ratio would be the first step.
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