Need some help to improve.

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xxrunixx
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Need some help to improve.

Postby xxrunixx » Mon Apr 17, 2017 3:37 pm

Hi guys! :) Ohayou! I would like to seek some help about my AMV, well this is my first time to create an AMV and I'm really enjoying it. Can you give me some feedback for my first AMV.



:D :D :D Thanks a lot! :) :bzz: :bzz: :bzz: :bzz:

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Re: Need some help to improve.

Postby Kionon » Mon Apr 17, 2017 8:55 pm

Forum rules
All videos posted in this forum, except for works in progress (WIP), must have a corresponding entry in the a-m-v.org database
Keep in mind that this is for Opinion Exchange. If you make a topic asking for an opinion, please offer an opinion in return
Giving out free opinions is always encouraged
When starting a new topic, please put 1:1, 2:1, etc... or WIP somewhere in the title
For example, 2:1 means "I will give you 2 opinions for every 1 you give me"


You should offer an opinion in exchange.
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Re: Need some help to improve.

Postby TicklesTheGhost » Wed Apr 19, 2017 8:37 pm

You have some strong points; impact editing is always a plus. My suggestion would be that some of your clips are a little too long and there are some parts where it seems to go black unexpectedly. You have good cut match ups to the song, keep practicing! :book:


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