UPDATED( 24th Jan 2017)!!! First AMV! WIP ! Need feedback! 1:1

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UPDATED( 24th Jan 2017)!!! First AMV! WIP ! Need feedback! 1:1

Post by Thecrypticninja » Sat Jan 21, 2017 8:59 am

Hey guys!

I am working on my first ever AMV, I need your feedback on how it looks so far! It's not much I know but any feedback or advice is appreciated! I am trying to do an amv on the enies lobby arc in one piece! If there is stuff like any effect is unnecessary or can be improved,etc please tell me and be brutally honest! Lol! If it's too small to give any feedback, please let me know! Thanks a lot in advance!

P.S: I just started learning editing a few days back. And I have a feeling that you guys might disagree with my music choice! But I felt like it suited to what I am trying to do!

Software I use: Sony Vegas pro 14. I thought of using after effects but decided to first completely get a grasp of Vegas .


UPDATE!! : I have made some progress since last. I decided update this thread because I didn't want to create a new one! Please tell me about the flow in the video, as last time I had made a mistake in it, and any new mistakes that I have made! And the zoom at 0:39 is a lil out of sync! Realized it after uploading! Will fix that! Any other mistakes please point it out! Thank you!!!
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Re: First AMV! Not completed! Need feedback on current progress!

Post by Kireblue » Sat Jan 21, 2017 9:16 am

I feel that the scene of the woman crying really breaks the flow of the intro. For this part, it seems that you're trying to focus on introducing the team and making them look cool, but that scene only focuses on a single character and has a completely different background than the other scenes in the buildup. Vivifx made a guide about this that does a much better job on explaining flow than I ever could https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J5Jjxb6Lw7s

I'd also recommend that you check out this AMV guide on sync http://www.animemusicvideos.org/forum/v ... =2&t=92942

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Re: First AMV! Not completed! Need feedback on current progress!

Post by Thecrypticninja » Sat Jan 21, 2017 9:19 am

kireblue wrote:I feel that the scene of the woman crying really breaks the flow of the intro. For this part, it seems that you're trying to focus on introducing the team and making them look cool, but that scene only focuses on a single character and has a completely different background than the other scenes in the buildup. Vivifx made a guide about this that does a much better job on explaining flow than I ever could https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J5Jjxb6Lw7s

I'd also recommend that you check out this AMV guide on sync http://www.animemusicvideos.org/forum/v ... =2&t=92942
Thank you!! I will definitely work on that! :D

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