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Re: Free Ops (Restrictions, Read First Post)

Post by Mol » Mon Apr 17, 2017 4:49 am

Nosubs- basically it's about his longing for alcohol with bits of making fun of it l; I feel it's hard to completely translate, cause of some dialect words.
here's a quick sketch
I'm drinking vodka and it's wonderful
Drinking straight from the morning
It's so pretty, unspeakable,
in my hand full glass.
My girl , full glass, transparent and delicate
and inside her vodka , my lover
Forbid it my mother

Without you day , loses it's shine
Texts my rhyme and vinyl shatters
Without you day which without waves (radiowave?)
Without pig's face
Radio without waves

Still sitting beside table , from radios plays some song
Again i will fucking take a drink , day without you for me painful
She knows exactly where her place, when i place her on the table
Sometimes i will sing something for myself
When i get drunk/fucked up

Without you day , loses it's shine
Texts my rhyme and vinyl shatters
Without you day which without waves (radiowave?)
Without pig's face
Radio without waves

I drinlk vodka and it's wonderful, thought it stretched me for a second
Taste yours is a guest in my mouth , in my blood i feel your promiles
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Still better than that MMO.
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Post by Kionon » Mon Apr 17, 2017 4:57 am

No, no, I got that. It's about wanting a full glass. Your emphasis was on wodki, of course, but I get the joke, considering the anime. I am no fan of Le Petite Cosette, but I know the plot, so honestly, this was significantly more enjoyable than the original source.
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Post by Kionon » Wed Apr 19, 2017 9:44 pm

Mol, your op is done.

I'm ready for the next round. Insert string of GOs here.
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Re: Free Ops (Restrictions, Read First Post)

Post by TheDestineeAMV » Thu Apr 20, 2017 1:32 am

Hi! Would love an opinion on my last AMV! Pretty sure it meets the qualifications :)


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Post by Kionon » Thu Apr 20, 2017 2:20 am

Works for me. Accepted.

Initial thoughts: I wish I understood this. Even though I lived in Seoul, my Korean is limited to ordering food and beer, and general greetings/pleasantries.

YouTube DESTROYED your video's quality, but Local is fine.
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Post by TheDestineeAMV » Thu Apr 20, 2017 11:02 am

Kionon wrote: Initial thoughts: I wish I understood this. Even though I lived in Seoul, my Korean is limited to ordering food and beer, and general greetings/pleasantries.
If you want, I had a link to the lyric translations in my description (down below). Sorry about the YouTube quality though :(
It's been a problem that I don't really know how to deal with yet...

Link to Spring Day lyric translations: https://genius.com/Bts-spring-day-lyrics

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Post by Kionon » Thu Apr 20, 2017 4:40 pm

OH! Bangtan Boys is the same as BTS? My friend Yui loves them. I'm not into K-Pop at all.
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Post by TheDestineeAMV » Fri Apr 21, 2017 11:30 am

Yeah, its really an acquired taste. Been listening since I was in sixth grade, and when you start liking it, you really can't stop. :shrug:

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Re: Free Ops (Restrictions, Read First Post)

Post by Kionon » Fri Apr 21, 2017 7:50 pm

Some transparency, in case people wonder why it takes me so long to finish an opinion, I'll explain my process so far with Destinee's AMV:

I watch the video multiple times in multiple ways, and with various gaps of times between viewing.

For instance, I have now watched this AMV on my LG monitor and my projector, with my Bose speakers. I watched it three times on the LG, and once on the projector. I am currently watching it on my MacBook Pro laptop screen. This allows me to account for differences in viewing experiences across multiple forms of hardware, so I can be sure an issue isn't on my end. Likewise, I will listen to the audio source on my onboard speakers, and though I haven't done it yet, my Sony MDR headphones I use for editing.

Time gaps allow me to compare how I feel about reviewable in comparison to my initial impression. Did I enjoy the video as much as the first time I saw it? Do I enjoy it more? Have I seen something I didn't see before? Is this a one trick pony and unlikely to stay in my collection?

Thus it can take quite a while to complete an opinion, because I want it to be a representation of my overall viewing experience, and not just an off the cuff impression.
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Re: Free Ops (Restrictions, Read First Post)

Post by TwilightChrono » Fri May 05, 2017 3:28 am

Hey Kionon. Long time no talk. Since when did you become a mod? Damn, I've been gone a while. I know the next round hasn't started, so I'll wait, but are MEP's allowed? Was thinking about Putting in CascadaThon 3 into the que, since we are starting work on CascadaThon 4 in the MEP section. Wanted a little exposure to maybe get some more people wanting to participate.

Anywho, it's good to see you.
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