Thx again to spend your time for me =p
I have an idea for the first characters and the others, and i will try to find something for the empty background =)
[WIP] Angel Beats! AMV
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Re: [WIP] Angel Beats! AMV
Now that was so much better! 
Anyway nice to know you added some credits to the beginning, but now that you did, I can't help but feel like the Angel Beats! that's slowly being written feels outta place. In fact it keeps distracting me from reading the credits properly since it's being animated slowly I can't help my eyes from looking up at it every so often D: Maybe you should remove it and make the font size for the credits a little bigger?
The cutters next are a nice addition, doesn't make that part so static anymore, the black border cutter seems to be expanding slightly faster in some parts, not sure if that was deliberate or accidental - check your keyframes. Also some lip flapping here, might wanna fix that.
Also is it just me or is the transition at 0:39-0:40 a little...glitchy? It's like the guy isn't being drawn on the screen anymore like it did before...
Masks look so much nicer than the feathery cutters from before
but the mask selection....some of the characters seem to have part of their head cut off 
It's not bad or anything, I just wasn't sure if it was intentional or not for the borders around them(you know like the edge of the screen). Sorry for my crappy explanation, if you have no idea what I'm banging on about then just leave it since it's not really a big issue anyway.
1:06-1:16 could do with a little background, maybe same scene lower opacity? I dunno why but I don't really like still backgrounds, especially not when the song is so upbeat.
Anyway this beta was a drastic improvement from the first one I saw, gudjob and I'm hoping to see more!
Anyway nice to know you added some credits to the beginning, but now that you did, I can't help but feel like the Angel Beats! that's slowly being written feels outta place. In fact it keeps distracting me from reading the credits properly since it's being animated slowly I can't help my eyes from looking up at it every so often D: Maybe you should remove it and make the font size for the credits a little bigger?
The cutters next are a nice addition, doesn't make that part so static anymore, the black border cutter seems to be expanding slightly faster in some parts, not sure if that was deliberate or accidental - check your keyframes. Also some lip flapping here, might wanna fix that.
Also is it just me or is the transition at 0:39-0:40 a little...glitchy? It's like the guy isn't being drawn on the screen anymore like it did before...
Masks look so much nicer than the feathery cutters from before
but the mask selection....some of the characters seem to have part of their head cut off It's not bad or anything, I just wasn't sure if it was intentional or not for the borders around them(you know like the edge of the screen). Sorry for my crappy explanation, if you have no idea what I'm banging on about then just leave it since it's not really a big issue anyway.1:06-1:16 could do with a little background, maybe same scene lower opacity? I dunno why but I don't really like still backgrounds, especially not when the song is so upbeat.
Anyway this beta was a drastic improvement from the first one I saw, gudjob and I'm hoping to see more!
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Gameurs
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Re: [WIP] Angel Beats! AMV
Ty for reply =)
For the transition at 0:39-0:40, i don't know why, maybe the encode as some bug...
I'll see for the rest, ty again!
For the transition at 0:39-0:40, i don't know why, maybe the encode as some bug...
I'll see for the rest, ty again!