well like the other one said, yeah, the subs can be a little annoying. you should try Virtural Dubmod, it helps, especially if you're using wmm. the clips were good and some matched. i haven't seen the anime before so the full effect wasn't all there. if you were conserned about reusing clips you also could have slowed some down a little more, it would add.
just keep going and learning from ever new amv you make. its true the more you make the better you get. i'm not even that good yet and i've been doing this for about a year. the best advice i can offer is really match/sync the music with the video. you have to not only listen to the lyrics, but 'feel' what the music is saying, you can feel certian things from the beats. if the video gives you goose bumps when you watch it, then you know you've done a good job. keep up the good work!
here are a few of mine...i have a few more if you want to check them out its up to you...
Naruto- A Rookie Genius
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=129355
Bleach- Number One (Version One
http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=131611
....this one got a lot of hits in a short time, but no opinions on it yet
