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Fate/Stay Night - Quickie

Post by animemay » Tue Jan 24, 2006 9:48 pm

This is a quick preview clip i made today. Can someone please tell me what you think of it. It's only 3 MB but with high quality so it wont take too much of your time...in exchange i'm willing to look at whoever wants feedback but since i'm only a forum member the vid would have to be uploaded at a different site in order for me to view it...and my bandwidth is that great so nothing over 30MB.

http://video.greatestjournal.com/files/fate.wmv

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Post by Malificus » Tue Jan 24, 2006 10:26 pm

Looks good.

something about 0:22 and 0:31 seems off though. 0:22 is well done, but just seems off to me for some reason, while 0:31 seems to be a tiny bit too soon, I'd have to see it a frame or two later to really tell though.. apart from that, everything looks clean. The timing is very well done, hitting the beats with just the right impact. The smiling face at 0:31 seems a little out of place though.

And how are you just a forum member? I'm pretty sure when you sign up for one thing (forum or main site), you're signed up for both. It's free anyway. :?

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Post by animemay » Tue Jan 24, 2006 11:19 pm

whoa, thanks for the advice. i'll try and amend that. Maybe i can download amvs then...i dont know, but i remember someone telling me i have to wait for weeks until i'm accepted to upload amvs and download other peoples etc...i'll try downloading one of your amvs

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Post by animemay » Tue Jan 24, 2006 11:23 pm

oh it worked :lol: do you have smaller sized versions of your amvs...may internets really slow so i had to cancel...

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Post by Malificus » Tue Jan 24, 2006 11:29 pm

No I don't, sorry. The first of mine is only about 24 MB, but the second is about 34. It's alright if you can't download them. Don't worry about it. I understand how bad dial up can be too. (It takes over 4 hours to upload these, and my internet loves to time out constantly. I think the connection timed out about 20 times on Guitars Last Forever, but luckily it resumed right where it left off. same for most of my downloads when the internet disconnects out of nowhere.)

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Post by animemay » Tue Jan 24, 2006 11:46 pm

actually i have a high speed connection but i've nearly reached my limit thats why i was asking for smaller files..to make the downloads worth it...after i go past the limit it goes to dial up..even though i have broadband uploading still takes ages...i dont get it. My one took me about 15-20minutes to upload and it's only 3 MB :?

Well i decided to download your Broken Heart anyway, and i think it's pretty good. It's a bit difficult to judge since you're matching the scenes to the lyrics...i think they fit in nicely...i'm not really familiar with the song though. yellowcard, i dont think i've ever heard of them. I like your ending. I've been meaing to get that anime, is it a movie?? Sorry i'm sorta side tracking but is it good?? is it a lot like voices of a distant star.

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Post by animemay » Wed Jan 25, 2006 1:52 am

oh and i fixed the parts you wanted me to...hopefully i've improved it..well i only spent about 5 minutes fixing it up. :o

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Post by Malificus » Wed Jan 25, 2006 9:58 pm

It's a good movie, and they're both by the same guy, so they're probably similar, but I've never seen voices of a distant star, so I wouldn't know

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