Need opion about my latest WIP(work in progress) AMV 1:1

[destroyer437]

here is what i have done so far with it i hope everyone enjoys it



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my second edit

[Kanadajinn]

I thought you could have synced the music with the action a bit better. It seems a lil random. Maybe try choosing scenes that flow with the music naturally. I'd like to see the finished product, though.

[destroyer437]

ty i will keep that in mind ^^

[Prof_Finn]

Yeah I'd say just make the cut more on-beat with the music and you'll be good.
Also at about 0:55 there's a fraction of a scene that needs to go, it creates a weird flashing effect like a subliminal message whereas it's probably just something that got left in on accident.

[bowieee]

Did you update this at any point? Curious to see the current version as you obviously love Shin's work as well. (;