BakemonoYume~ WIP

[Azure Vermillion]

Getting straight to the point, having trouble thinking of scenes that relate to the verse 'fight more careful with that there, see what you made me do?' - Does anyone who has seen Bakemonogatari have any suggestions for scenes to use? - I was thinking the initial scrape-up between Kanburu and Araragi at the railway tracks, but I'm not sure if I should replace the previous 'anyone's guess how he does' with that scene instead

Slightly old beta here: http://www.sendspace.com/file/0j2edq

I'm trying to be as literal with the lyrics as possible without making the scenes stand out too much.
Criticism as well as general thoughts are welcome
Thank you all.