I started a pictorial autobiography. Critique, please.

inthesto · Post by **inthesto** » Thu Jul 31, 2008 12:41 am

In the beginning, I am dormant. Dead to the world, without a speck of life.

But then I am commanded...compelled by God. To rise from my grave and rescue his daughter.

I awake, a mere shell of myself.

My quest is perilous! The hordes of evil obstruct my path, for it is righteous.

But in the face of adversity, I do not yield. I only power up.

Until...!

Unleashing my true fury, none can stand in my path.

The face of evil shows itself, but I have no fear, for my faith is strong.

I am trapped in a microcosm of Hell as Satan seeks to end my existence.

He attacks! His twisted mirror images swarm me, but I cannot be shaken.

The fearless, the faithful prevail Satan. It shall always be so.

But Satan, nay Evil itself is obdurate. It cannot be destroyed, only staved off for another day.

In a moment of weakness, Satan steals my strength. But I will return to fight once more. For I have a mission, and it will not be denied.

Fall_Child42 · Post by **Fall_Child42** » Thu Jul 31, 2008 1:22 am

WISE FROM YO GWAVE!

JaddziaDax · Post by **JaddziaDax** » Thu Jul 31, 2008 1:22 am

FWEAWESS WONE?

8bit_samurai · Post by **8bit_samurai** » Thu Jul 31, 2008 1:39 am

Hmm, I seem to have played the story of your life on a SEGA Genesis back in my childhood. Although, there is one thing different, and that is I took control of your brother and my brother took control of you, though I'm not sure if he was your brother or just a mere acquaintance. Whichever he was, you saw him befall before your very eyes before you ever finally defeated Satan, since I had a knack of not being able to control him as good as my brother was able to controlled you. For that I apologize if this caused any grief for you. If it makes you feel any better I mastered the technique of controlling your comrade in arms so that both of you seen the fall of Satan and thus rescuing the daughter of God. Though I'm not sure how that worked out since I forgot how it ended since I played it long ago, and I'm not sure how the both of you got rewarded. May hap I should play the Chronicles of your Quest once again to refresh my memory of how your quest came to an end.

Those were good times...

NS · Post by NS » Thu Jul 31, 2008 1:45 am

I played shinobi 3 for genesis. it was awesome. I'm a ninja.

Radical_Yue · Post by **Radical_Yue** » Thu Jul 31, 2008 2:01 am

Yingface, PsyD wrote:
Unleashing my true furry, none can stand in my path.

fix'd

The Origonal Head Hunter · Post by **The Origonal Head Hunter** » Thu Jul 31, 2008 2:23 am

You're constipated while you transform.

Copycat_Revolver · Post by **Copycat_Revolver** » Thu Jul 31, 2008 3:16 am

For truly it was ancient powered-up Greeks who invented the speedo.

guy07 · Post by **guy07** » Thu Jul 31, 2008 12:51 pm

It moved me to tears.

badmartialarts · Post by **badmartialarts** » Thu Jul 31, 2008 5:17 pm

Doktor F.C. Mad Genius wrote:WISE FROM YO GWAVE!

LIES FROM YOUR GLAIVE!

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I started a pictorial autobiography. Critique, please.

I started a pictorial autobiography. Critique, please.

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