[Motion Graphics] The Mini-Mograph Project

[Nya-chan Production]

I actually liked the cuts, they were unorthodox and kinda increased suspension/tension. It felt really dynamic because of them (and considering how static the whole scene IN FACT was).

[Brad]

It wasn't that I had a problem withThe cuts themselves, it was the placement of them. Like, the camera would slow down, then speed up and cut soon after. Was just too jarring for me, considering the "serenity" of the overall look and feel.

[Kristyrat]

Done and added:

http://vimeo.com/groups/99017/videos/26889389

[McDirty]

Awesome work Kristyrat

I like the concept. Definitely would like to see more.

[McDirty]

http://www.vimeo.com/26903245

Here's my second vid. This one doesn't follow the current theme and motif, but I made this in order to improve my skills with the last calligraphy vid that I posted. I'll definitely focus on a different concept for my next vid.

[Brad]

Much better quality in those brush strokes. They looked great. The only thing I could say was a little "meh" for me was the green color in the gradient. Too "100% green" for me. Otherwise, quite cool.

I'm thinking I'm gonna go ahead and put up a new theme/motif here within the next couple days. I wanted to wait for John to finish his up, but I'm getting impatient :O

[McDirty]

Thanks. I'm excited to see the new theme and motif.

[Nya-chan Production]

I didn't like that some of the strokes moved towards other strokes. That was... weird >.>

Especially when two of them nearly fell together before the end.

[McDirty]

I didn't like that some of the strokes moved towards other strokes. That was... weird >.>

Especially when two of them nearly fell together before the end.

This was a 3d axis problem. Something I'll need to pay attention to next time.

[Brad]

Alright. I've decided to go ahead and start the next project. For those of you still working on Fake, please continue.

THEME: Unexpected
MOTIF: Argyle

Remember the motif just has to appear in some way, not be the dominating visual, unless you want it to be. The theme of "unexpected" can be taken however you like.