It did seem like it ended a bit abruptly, but there's still a logical sequence. Visually, it's about where it should be, love the action.
I think I was a bit iffy about some of the scene choices, but it'll take me a while to figure out which exactly.
Well done, thanks for keeping the project alive!

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Now, how about updates from... well I guess it's only pen-pen, and wherever BMA is if he still happens to be interested.
I happen to be interested, so I'll ask that question right now:
is there another track that needs to be done, where you think I might be of help? I could, gradually and slowly as ever, start putting it together. I now know I can hold a committment to the project - as I did over the last year.
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Bum:
Will you marry me?
