Code: I would be more happy if you hit the beats instead of syncing to the lyrics, sorry >.< I don't mind whether you use fades or blurs (or hardcut) until it looks good
Hitori: I think you should use different effects

you use the flash and zoom too many times, and it doesn't look nice like this, and I think that many of the flashes are unnecessary, you could leave them out (or if you leave in some flashes then reduce them), I also think that you should put on some zoom on the clips, it's would be better if we saw the characters moving (or at least the camera) and you didn't just hit the beats with the flashes. 0:21 looks strange, there are too many beats? or just the clip is like that? and at the end maybe you could use other scenes? because it's not so clear what's happening (well I know cuz I have seen the anime), but it's just a suggestion
Tritio: as I said, they look like they are not the music, not to the beat or how to say hope the flashes look unorganized, I hope you understand now >.<
and Code, I think you didn't send your part to MelyoraMel

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