[AMV] Demon Slayer ~ Rock Bottom

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[AMV] Demon Slayer ~ Rock Bottom

Post by AMVGenius » Sat Apr 24, 2021 11:08 pm

I am brand new to AMV-making but took the time and effort with my first.

The scene selection and editing style isn't flashy or amazing but I don't think it's terrible, feel free to be very critical, I will take it all on board.


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Re: [AMV] Demon Slayer ~ Rock Bottom

Post by Kireblue » Sun Apr 25, 2021 8:50 am

Welcome to the Org! The rules of announcing videos in the "AMV Announcement forum" require you to catalog your video first. So please do that as soon as possible. If you don't know how, here is the FAQ post about it: How to Catalog & Upload Videos

Until then, I'm going to move your thread to the “Awaiting Catalog Entry” forum. And I can move it back once I see that you've done it.


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Re: [AMV] Demon Slayer ~ Rock Bottom

Post by AMVGenius » Tue Apr 27, 2021 4:18 am

Kireblue wrote:
Sun Apr 25, 2021 8:50 am

Welcome to the Org! The rules of announcing videos in the "AMV Announcement forum" require you to catalog your video first. So please do that as soon as possible. If you don't know how, here is the FAQ post about it: How to Catalog & Upload Videos

Until then, I'm going to move your thread to the “Awaiting Catalog Entry” forum. And I can move it back once I see that you've done it.

I believe I have successfully uploaded it.

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Re: [AMV] Demon Slayer ~ Rock Bottom

Post by vkamv » Tue Apr 27, 2021 10:55 pm

Things I noticed right away that you might want to change next time: first, footage without hard subs is usually best unless you have a specific message you are trying to convey with those subtitles. Second, a lot of the scenes seamed to lag on still frames. I would have shortened the scenes or at least camera panned on the still shots or soft zoom in or out. Looks weird to just have a static still shot.

Thought you did a good job with the overall scene selection and matching to the lyrics. Nice work.

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