Chris Brueggeman - Enjoy Yourself (Sailor Stars AMV)

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Re: Chris Brueggeman - Enjoy Yourself (Sailor Stars AMV)

Post by Kionon » Wed Feb 27, 2019 9:24 am

You should enable playback on outside websites so people do not need to click through.

That said, I enjoyed seeing Sailor Stars anything, and I think the focus on Galaxia's captive senshi makes a lot of sense for this audio. However, I felt cuts went on way too long and lip flap seriously detracted. Excellent concept, but the execution could be much, much tighter.
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Re: Chris Brueggeman - Enjoy Yourself (Sailor Stars AMV)

Post by seasons » Wed Feb 27, 2019 1:57 pm

I really like the vibe of this, yet it feels like a kind of random series of clips. Then again, "random clips" AMVs are often all about establishing such a vibe, don't have to tell a story or make sense outside of how they feel.

Kind of agree with Kionon in that this could have been a little tighter. Some lip flap is fine, but there's quite a lot here.

Very good quality audio and video, editing was clean easy on the eyes. This song sounds SO familiar but I have no idea where I would have heard it before.

I definitely think this could be improved, yet I definitely enjoyed this. 2 minutes made this go down really easy and I didn't think it was anywhere close to wearing out its welcome.

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Re: Chris Brueggeman - Enjoy Yourself (Sailor Stars AMV)

Post by Coraje » Wed Feb 27, 2019 6:14 pm

Kionon wrote:
Wed Feb 27, 2019 9:24 am
You should enable playback on outside websites so people do not need to click through.

That said, I enjoyed seeing Sailor Stars anything, and I think the focus on Galaxia's captive senshi makes a lot of sense for this audio. However, I felt cuts went on way too long and lip flap seriously detracted. Excellent concept, but the execution could be much, much tighter.
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Re: Chris Brueggeman - Enjoy Yourself (Sailor Stars AMV)

Post by Coraje » Wed Feb 27, 2019 6:17 pm

seasons wrote:
Wed Feb 27, 2019 1:57 pm
I really like the vibe of this, yet it feels like a kind of random series of clips. Then again, "random clips" AMVs are often all about establishing such a vibe, don't have to tell a story or make sense outside of how they feel.

Kind of agree with Kionon in that this could have been a little tighter. Some lip flap is fine, but there's quite a lot here.

Very good quality audio and video, editing was clean easy on the eyes. This song sounds SO familiar but I have no idea where I would have heard it before.

I definitely think this could be improved, yet I definitely enjoyed this. 2 minutes made this go down really easy and I didn't think it was anywhere close to wearing out its welcome.
Maybe the song sounds familiar to you because it's a sampling of Michael Jackson- Off The Walk


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Re: Chris Brueggeman - Enjoy Yourself (Sailor Stars AMV)

Post by seasons » Thu Feb 28, 2019 1:25 pm

You're right.

Looking forward to more of your works.

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