MOB VS KOYAMA
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DiggerShelduck
- Joined: Thu Jun 21, 2018 12:01 pm
MOB VS KOYAMA
critics appreciated
Last edited by DiggerShelduck on Sat Oct 06, 2018 3:13 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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vkamv
- Joined: Fri Mar 30, 2018 12:07 am
- Status: Madoka is life.
Re: MOB VS KOYAMA
Audio/Visual: The source material was very clean and I liked you contrast/lower exposure work. Made the animation pop out a bit. Your choice of zoom and rotate effects were effective as well. They weren’t overboard and didn’t distract but enhanced the feel and added your unique touch to the fight.DiggerShelduck wrote:
critics apprecuated
Synchronization: I felt the sync of the fight didn’t always match the pace of the song. For example, at 1:18 to 1:30 the song was at a subdued tone but your scenes were very action packed and the cuts were very rapid. Didn’t feel in sync to me.
I suppose it would be hard to stay in sync since you've limited your scene selection to a single fight, and therefore, can't use other scenes for the more slower pace.
I did think your sync at 0:39 and 1:45 was great and on cue.
Story/Theme: You did a good job matching the song to the fight for the most part. There wasn’t much of a story since you only focused on one fight, but that was the intent.
An enjoyable watch.
Last edited by vkamv on Sat Oct 06, 2018 5:10 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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DiggerShelduck
- Joined: Thu Jun 21, 2018 12:01 pm
Re: MOB VS KOYAMA
Thank you for the feedbackvkamv wrote:Audio/Visual: The source material was very clean and I liked you contrast/lower exposure work. Made the animation pot out a bit. You chose of zoom and rotate effects were effective as well. They weren’t overboard and didn’t distract but enhanced the feel and added your unique touch to the fight.DiggerShelduck wrote:
critics apprecuated
Synchronization: I felt the sync of the fight didn’t always match the pace of the song. For example, at 1:18 to 1:30 the song was at a subdued tone but your scenes were very action packed and the cuts were very rapid. Didn’t feel in sync to me.
I suppose it would be hard to stay in sync since you've limited you scene selection to a single fight, and therefore, can't use other scenes for the more slower pace.
I did think your sync at 0:39 and 1:45 was great and on cue.
Story/Theme: You did a good job matching the song to the fight for the most part. There wasn’t much of a story since you only focused on one fight, but that was the intent.
An enjoyable watch.
I'll definitely apply your tips on my upcoming amvs
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Lylaaz
- Joined: Sat Sep 22, 2018 6:11 pm
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Re: MOB VS KOYAMA
Hi!
I liked the quality of the source material and i think transitions were the best part. I really liked your transitions.
However only focusing on one fight can give you perhaps views on youtube but AMV quality-wise it can turn out a bit boring since i know there is nothing more to it than just one fight. To make 1 fight very interesting to watch you really need to work on sync. I also think the scenes were changing a bit too slow,so part that felt like could have been improved with pacing better with the music
I think overall nice AMV but could have had more changes of scenes to make it more interesting.
I liked the quality of the source material and i think transitions were the best part. I really liked your transitions.
However only focusing on one fight can give you perhaps views on youtube but AMV quality-wise it can turn out a bit boring since i know there is nothing more to it than just one fight. To make 1 fight very interesting to watch you really need to work on sync. I also think the scenes were changing a bit too slow,so part that felt like could have been improved with pacing better with the music
I think overall nice AMV but could have had more changes of scenes to make it more interesting.
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seasons
- Joined: Wed Jul 22, 2009 12:31 pm
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Re: MOB VS KOYAMA
The first 40 seconds was relatively mellow compared to everything that followed, so yeah, that makes sense given how the big drop comes in 0:40, but still, there's still lots of action in this part, so the changes that happen at around 0:40 didn't hit me as hard as I felt like they possibly could have.
Single fight-style AMVs really aren't my thing so I don't even want to try to evaluate this. I thought the editing was good, the concept was something I've seen a million times before, would have loved to see something of a twist on it here but that's a tall order, I guess.
Single fight-style AMVs really aren't my thing so I don't even want to try to evaluate this. I thought the editing was good, the concept was something I've seen a million times before, would have loved to see something of a twist on it here but that's a tall order, I guess.