My very cynical poem.

[Azyne]

Believe it or not, I, the anti-animeist, actually watched a video *gasp* and it gave me inspiration. Not really, but I heard a line in there that said, "She does not bleed." Which is what this is based off of.

Ahem.

Flawless

She does not see
And does not hear
And does not speak
And does not fear.

She does not pick
And does not choose
And does not win
And does not lose.

And does not bleed.

She does not wish
And does not dream
And does not flinch
And does not scream.

She does not trace
And does not lead
And does not rid
And does not need.

Does not bleed.

She does not give
And does not take
And does not build
And does not break.

Does not try
And does not scare
And does not heed
And does not care.

Since she does not bleed.

She does not seem
And does not squint
And does not flare
And does not hint.

She does not bleed.

Nor does she leave
And does not wait
And does not love
And does not hate.

Because she does not bleed.

/end.

I know there are a lot of mistakes, especially near the beginning, so if you can think up any new ones, please let me know. Or any random tips. Just don't flame.

[fyrtenheimer]

..what are you doing here?

[Azyne]

..what are you doing here?

Posting my poem.

[fyrtenheimer]

that's great anti-animeist

[AnimeAnubis]

..what are you doing here?

Posting my poem.

In the place that your supposed to introduce yourself?

[Lyrs]

..what are you doing here?

Posting my poem.

In the place that your supposed to introduce yourself?

blah...didn't you read the wurds?

[Flint the Dwarf]

I know there are a lot of mistakes, especially near the beginning, so if you can think up any new ones, please let me know. Or any random tips. Just don't flame.

I like how you do nothing but rather pathetically try to insult people and show your deluded superiority, and now you ask for helpful criticism free of flames. I have a poem for you...

*ahem*

There's this girl on the Org
Who is a hypocrite
And her name is Azyne.

/end

[fyrtenheimer]

[Azyne]

I know there are a lot of mistakes, especially near the beginning, so if you can think up any new ones, please let me know. Or any random tips. Just don't flame.

I like how you do nothing but rather pathetically try to insult people and show your deluded superiority, and now you ask for helpful criticism free of flames. I have a poem for you...

*ahem*

There's this girl on the Org
Who is a hypocrite
And her name is Azyne.

/end

I'm flattered. Actually, it makes a lot of sense that I ask for flame-free constructive critisism since I'm still improving my writing. Most of you ppl are old. And pretty damn hopeless.

In the place that your supposed to introduce yourself?

This forum is for general self promotion and the like or just to say "Hello".

Fyrt: you're sad. You make imitation avatars out of your own free will that don't even make a point. Which reminds me, I must change mine, I'd decorated it for Halloween, which is quite over now.

[fyrtenheimer]

And you're a self proclaimed "anti-animeist" at an anime website. Oh hey, let's talk about that tooth fairy.


You're hilarious. Make us another shitty poem.