Tenchi fan fiction

[Neptune L`amour]

Whew... After a mild hiatus I'm back! I've been working on a fan fiction as I'm sure you can figure from the title (I told you I was a writer!). Anyway since I don't really have anyone to proof read it for me I decided to post it here so hopefully you all can drop some creative criticism. I can't assure you that you'll like it, and I don't really know if the idea has been done before (I haven't read much off of tmffa.com) but I will guarantee that it won't be the worst fan fic you've ever read! Hopefully... I dunno I've seen some pretty bad stuff myself so I know its not the worst but... Oh hell anyway here's the link to it

http://www.geocities.com/neptune_lamour ... _beta.html

Ok then, there it is. Ahem, I know that their is a lot of other Tenchi fan fiction out their but to be honest I don't think that most of it dose the show justice. I don't know if I can really remedy that but I'll never know unless I just start writing and see how the masses take it.

Anyway to those of you who take the time to read it I appreciate it very much. It may sound silly but I respect all of your opinions very much (well maybe not ALL of them but the majority at least). Again, thanks.