Help with AMV story initiation

xoverburnx · Post by **xoverburnx** » Thu Apr 05, 2007 3:29 pm

Dear everyone,

This is a re-release of my existing video "Closure". It fixes issues people had in the previous version as well as initiate the story I was trying to portray.

With this one I did not do my research on 'how many other people tried this already' so lets avoid that if you recognize a similar story.

The premise: Cloud and Sephiroth fight for eternity and there's no clear winner for whatever reasons. I want THIS video to put an end to that.

http://youtube.com/watch?v=QuXR3oeBUDU

1) The dude on the pillar is like the narrator, don't mind him.

2) Cloud remembers the crimes Sephiroth has committed

3) Aeris flashbacks and stuff

4) (fight w/ bahamut is some action filler)

5) Cloud is preparing to fight sephiroth
- foreshadowing of cloud's death and reuniting w/ aeris in some afterlife

6) Final fight w/ sephiroth where cloud dies, the end.

http://youtube.com/watch?v=QuXR3oeBUDU

I would like some critique on the initiation of this story. Most people never think about cloud losing, but thats the sure end to this story if sephiroth can always be resurrected at whim. Anyway, should I move the order around in this video?

Other critique is appreciated.

xoverburnx · Post by **xoverburnx** » Thu Apr 05, 2007 3:31 pm

Why can't I post youtube links? Use this instead.

http://tinyurl.com/2lpxv5

Thank you.

JaddziaDax · Post by **JaddziaDax** » Thu Apr 05, 2007 3:36 pm

because we have had too many problems with the tube site here :/
plus it violates their TOS to upload coppywrited material