have this thread been forgotten? oh well, i'll just post anyways in the unlikely event someone still visits here. so here's short story number two. http://www.fictionpress.net/read.php?storyid=1267635
hope that came out alright though not really sure. if you want leave a review there or just tell me what you thought on here. even if there is nobody checking this thing i will regularly post in case someone checks out the old out of date threads. Sayonara.