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by Melanchthon » Mon Sep 03, 2012 8:38 pm
Pretty nice vid. I thought the couple of shots around 0.45 were particularly well-matched to the song, and overall it kept my attention. I didn't think the effect at about 2.00 was necessary, though I did like the quick ripple immediately afterwards. After that I thought the video got a bit lazy, with the cuts being less precise and the visual details not really matching the audio details as they had done earlier in the video. The final shot of the guy going through the window into the coloured sky was strong, but it lacked buildup.
It'd be better if you did something about the watermark too, though that's a minor detail -- even with the minimal changes to its position on the screen it was distracting whenever the action was passing over it.