Finally got a chance to download. This one's better than the first one. The timing is generally well done on the action scenes, but it could still use a little work. Try working with secondary beats. I'm not sure how to help you out beyond that. My main gripe is that it seemed too long. There were parts where it looks like you just put "filler" stuff in. I think if it were shorter (like editing the song to appropriate length) then it would have been better. The end fight scene was good. Timing through most of the scene seemed well thought out. Anyhow, that's just my two cents. Work on your timing and go for shorter clips/songs, so you don't have to use filler.
*sigh* Okay, i'm gonna use spPanda's Feuer Frei GW music vid as an example. Specifically right at the beginning and at about 2:30. There are other places in the vid where it seems to follow secondary beats, and the "vocal cue" beats should be noted as well. Gah. I'm not sure I can explain what secondary beats are. I was sure I saw something about them in a guide, but I can't seem to locate it.
now I need a guide to premiere, cuz I have version 6.0 but I didn't know I could get a pic of the audio (for lack of a better term) to show up, or how to do pretty much anything exept pick out and splice in video and audio.