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Hope I'm doing this right

Post by xAbominationx » Sat Sep 07, 2013 1:24 pm

I just started an account, I'm hoping for some feedback on my videos.

Warning they all contain spoilers

So one is based on El Cazador de la Bruja : http://youtu.be/e0Xy_Mq6DtY (this is spoilerrifc if you haven't seen the series don't watch this video)
Next is a composite of many anime light on spoilers: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u6vLNcMa ... hMd6_vSmyg
Finally spoiler heavy Revolutionary Girl Utena based one: http://youtu.be/6UQ6gj-tPZo

I'm no pro and only have iMovie 6 to do this with... It's a challenge. Anyway feedback good and bad would be very helpful.


I should note, I'd be happy to exchange feedback with anyone 1:1 but I'm really new and I just like what I like and don't what I don't, so I'm not sure about the value of my critique.
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Re: Hope I'm doing this right

Post by TritioAFB » Sat Sep 07, 2013 5:44 pm

Not bad, but not good at the same time.

I'll leave the rest of videos to the other members. So I picked the first one since I'm interested in amvs using El cazador de la bruja as source.

Here are my thoughts:

There's no real plot/story in it. It's just the presentation of the characters, then you are repeating sequences of them, sometimes random, sometimes, I see you wanted to give them a meaning, but it's not clear, even for someone that has watched the serie. Also, the use of the same effect doesn't help much in the video. Nor to mention the long scenes. Dont worry man, this is something you can improve in next videos
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xAbominationx
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Re: Hope I'm doing this right

Post by xAbominationx » Sat Sep 07, 2013 11:26 pm

Thanks for the feedback.

Rewatching... I have been dissatisfied with the length of some scenes.

I'm working on something with devil lady at the moment. it's very different from the others.

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Re: Hope I'm doing this right

Post by Gallup » Wed Sep 18, 2013 10:59 am

I will review your Revolutionary Girl Utena vid if you review mine.

http://www.animemusicvideos.org/members ... p?v=193330

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Re: Hope I'm doing this right

Post by Gallup » Thu Sep 19, 2013 10:17 am

Review has been left for your vid.

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