Haus Haberdasher wrote:A new version of the West wing has been posted on the beta sheet.
hamstar138 wrote:For God Help the outcasts I fixed that transitions and I took RiderZ's option and tried to add more animals...I have it up but after looking at it I liked the previous version more without them in the middle of the video and it mostly being humans only...
Rider4Z wrote:this version works much better imo. but now it feels a bit long, i wonder if you can trim out a few segments of the song. dunno how good you are at editing audio but you might try...
Hagaren Viper wrote:
God Help the Somas: I'm not sure how I feel about the new animal scenes. I really like some of them [Tiger, snake, bunny] but the others feel much too cutesy for the vid [Monkey, cow] or flash across the screen too quickly [Monkey again, boar]. I wouldn't be against taking out a couple of the scenes, since you don't have enough time to show all the animals anyway.
No Way Out: I think this has officially become the Hamstar MEP... But seriously, this is cute though! I'm glad to see this song finally get used in an AMV. I don't have many complains as far as editing or scenes, maybe get rid of the flap at 0:47, and be careful of the logo in the top that pops in a few scenes but otherwise it's pretty much good to go, I think!
Hagaren Viper wrote:West Wing: Nailed it! Only suggestion is that 1:44 seems strange because the guy gets stabbed, then instantly seems fine after. I havent seen the anime so maybe thats more or less how it is though.
Haus Haberdasher wrote:That's about how it happens. It actually transitions into a flashback/hallucination/something similar, and he wakes up uninjured from it. The movie itself is a bit confusing (in my opinion) up until the ending explanation. Basically, a lot of stuff that's shown isn't really happening. That was one of the areas I struggled with, because a lot of the scenes in the movie just don't make sense out of context (and can be a bit strange in context as well).
SatoshiSakura wrote:New beta's up. I changed the price charming part, but wasn't sure what to do with the ending, someone suggested not to end it on the school, but I'm a little stuck as to what to put there instead.
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