I really liked the concept you had with this video, plus the music!
I liked the editing in this video, aside from too much of the bright transition and I thought your colour correction was really awesome. Although, I've watched the video 3 or 4 times now and no matter how hard I try I can't really feel any emotion when I watch it, and with this type of song/video I usually bawl like a little child from all of the OHGODWHYAREN'TTHEYTOGETHER feelings that I usually I get. D:
The editing and everything was really solid, but for me it was missing the emotional atmosphere of the song. ;__;
It was a nice watch though and it had a lot of potential, and I'm excited to see what you come up with next! :3