Desde mi Cielo - TritioAFB

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Desde mi Cielo - TritioAFB

Postby TritioAFB » Mon Apr 01, 2013 11:39 am

It's the first time I'm making this, so there's the new video already:

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Desde mi Cielo or From my Heaven as you wish to call it

Old entry will be kept in the thread in case you haven't watched it:

Spoiler :
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So long time not posting something here, let's get started today :up:
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Re: Live or Die - TritioAFB

Postby Kisagi » Mon Apr 01, 2013 3:35 pm

nice one :up: :up:
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Re: Live or Die - TritioAFB

Postby TritioAFB » Fri Apr 05, 2013 9:21 am

Thanks man :up:
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Re: Live or Die - TritioAFB

Postby ibabrak » Fri Apr 05, 2013 1:01 pm

There were some scenes that were little out of place imo but overall it was a very nice and solid amv. Good job man :up:
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Re: Live or Die - TritioAFB

Postby -Kyros- » Sat Apr 06, 2013 3:13 pm

Not bad
I think at some points you should focus on better synch (at some points I think you could do more) , and the final part I was not very convinced
however, you did a good job and put me curious to watch this series
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Re: Live or Die - TritioAFB

Postby TritioAFB » Sun Apr 07, 2013 10:32 pm

I was getting obsessed with the synch in the first betas, then relax in the finals :bear:

But yes, I'll keep it in mind for the future proyects. Thanks for the comments
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Re: Live or Die - TritioAFB

Postby Hikado95 » Mon Apr 08, 2013 6:25 pm

not bad :) :up: :up:
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Re: Live or Die - TritioAFB

Postby TritioAFB » Thu Apr 11, 2013 11:17 am

Gracias pana :dino:
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Re: Live or Die - TritioAFB

Postby Animated » Fri Apr 12, 2013 12:47 pm

or ? I think I'll prefer the first one for obvious reasons :P

So, my opinion on this. Good editing (I think I've seen better from you, doc!) but what bothered me the most is the linear storyline you showed us. Even though I couldn't understand the story of the video at all, it seemed like a collage of some anime sequences which were edited in a very unfitting action way. For example, the part at the lake with the boy and the girl: they were only looking each other and I was prepared for a massive fight with the kind of editing you used! Same goes with the wedding part and the boys fighting in the forest: you gave it so much tension, where there was none needed. Also, abrupt ending was abrupt :( Maybe it's just me that I don't like videos with only one anime used, but I believe this could have been much better - some clever ideas here and there, like the japanese text, but overally it was just average :nose: Take out your medical knives and show us what you can! :awesome:
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Re: Live or Die - TritioAFB

Postby TheCacoVenom » Sat Apr 13, 2013 11:08 pm

go tritio, well you know good work, yao
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Re: Live or Die - TritioAFB

Postby DarTH GeeSe » Sat Apr 13, 2013 11:16 pm

well for my say in it and for a noob that is learning i think overall it was kool but i must agree on a few parts from Animated i was looking for a nice fight scene form him and the girl at the lake but overall nice amv i must watch this anime... :)
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Re: Live or Die - TritioAFB

Postby MystykAMV » Sun Apr 14, 2013 3:14 pm

LOLOOOL so this was yours??? I didn't even know, I just saw title and downloaded it (from an archive for contest videos) and I actually liked it :P some parts could have been well made, but I enjoyed it overall, good job Tritio :D
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Re: Live or Die - TritioAFB

Postby TritioAFB » Mon Apr 15, 2013 6:39 pm

Thanks for the comments.

@Animated: While it's true that I kept the pacing the same during the video, I don't retreat about the idea of keeping one anime for this video. SOmetimes I need a rest from the multi-anime and instead go with only one. But yeah, sometimes I think I should show some new tricks I guess :amv:

@Mystyk: Yes, this was mine. Can I ask what happened with the Con?
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Re: Live or Die - TritioAFB

Postby MystykAMV » Tue Apr 16, 2013 4:09 am

TritioAFB wrote:@Mystyk: Yes, this was mine. Can I ask what happened with the Con?


Here, the results, if you haven't seen yet:
Spoiler :
1 Zakuro
2 Fullmoon
3 Red Poppy
4 Mystyk
5 veravero
6 Trikki;Akatsuki;Kas
7 Messiah
8 Eclipse Studio
9 Nya-chan Production
10 Kvakond
11 TritioAFB
12 Trikki
13 Cendra
14 Seni - Bibi
15 Skywalker
16 Shi
17 Hinako ; Pi-chan
18 Rhohir
19 UltraViolet
20 CarolineArt
21 Dumet
22 North Greenfield
23 Trotyiegyed
24 Daichi
25 Izzy
26 Vynnes
27 The Feather of Angels Stúdió
28 Encsy


you placed quite well :D so congrats!
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Re: Live or Die - TritioAFB

Postby TritioAFB » Fri Apr 19, 2013 9:31 pm

Hmm, not bad. I could do better for next time though. Thanks for letting me know :awesome:
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