Dark Fervor

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lloyd9988
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Re: Dark Fervor

Post by lloyd9988 » Thu Feb 07, 2013 4:01 am

I didn't like the White flashes but they transitioned smoothly every time... ._. Either way, very smooth video, solid concept and awesome watch :up: Good AMV :3 Motion, even the white flashes, moved the AMV very smoothly... ... So jelly how smooth you made it look honestly... ._.

My favorite part was from 2:24 - 2:28. That was either great scene selection or great camera movement. Either way, totally good idea using that camera, just wish there was more follow-through with the camera right after the flashing. Also, really amazing how you focused mostly on the relationship between the two girls rather than just portraying: "Oh yeah, Good guy verses Bad Guy... Enjoy the pretty action scenes". Different action AMV conceptually from most Action AMVs that says: "Here's the friendship between the two girls and their struggles... Enjoy the Pretty Action scenes"... Great job man :up:

8.5/10 (Lack of follow through with the camera motion and the freakin' White Flashes) >.<

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Re: Dark Fervor

Post by Emong » Fri Feb 08, 2013 4:15 pm

I liked your sense of clip selection even though I had no idea what was going on there. But the elements of a standard angsty action amv were there.

I didn't dig the white flashes either. I also thought that the pacing should have been faster and the sync tighter during the chorus parts (or the action parts if you will)

Nice amv nonetheless :up:

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blaksun
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Re: Dark Fervor

Post by blaksun » Fri Feb 08, 2013 6:50 pm

I can´t help to fell like it need a lite more work some scenes just fell random to me like for example the Mini Gun scenes ?
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Re: Dark Fervor

Post by SF_Phoenix » Fri Feb 08, 2013 10:56 pm

lloyd9988 wrote:I didn't like the White flashes but they transitioned smoothly every time... ._. Either way, very smooth video, solid concept and awesome watch :up: Good AMV :3 Motion, even the white flashes, moved the AMV very smoothly... ... So jelly how smooth you made it look honestly... ._.

My favorite part was from 2:24 - 2:28. That was either great scene selection or great camera movement. Either way, totally good idea using that camera, just wish there was more follow-through with the camera right after the flashing. Also, really amazing how you focused mostly on the relationship between the two girls rather than just portraying: "Oh yeah, Good guy verses Bad Guy... Enjoy the pretty action scenes". Different action AMV conceptually from most Action AMVs that says: "Here's the friendship between the two girls and their struggles... Enjoy the Pretty Action scenes"... Great job man :up:

8.5/10 (Lack of follow through with the camera motion and the freakin' White Flashes) >.<
Thanks for watching! Yeah, I didn't actually realize I used that many white flashes until it was mentioned =/
Emong wrote:I liked your sense of clip selection even though I had no idea what was going on there. But the elements of a standard angsty action amv were there.

I didn't dig the white flashes either. I also thought that the pacing should have been faster and the sync tighter during the chorus parts (or the action parts if you will)

Nice amv nonetheless :up:
Yeah flashes... this is what I get for focusing too much on getting flow and forgetting about the rest. Thanks for the reply :)
blaksun wrote:I can´t help to fell like it need a lite more work some scenes just fell random to me like for example the Mini Gun scenes ?
The minigun scene was actually part of her 'rampage' when she goes off killing the exorcists she worked with (minigun one is actually the head of the organization). I feel that if you haven't seen the series you may feel that a lot of the scenes are random, it was something I was a bit concerned when making it this way. Thanks for watching :)

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