Two WIPs (5cm/s and various)

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Two WIPs (5cm/s and various)

Postby Warr3h » Mon Jan 28, 2013 7:25 am

Or at least one WIP, my first AMV is pretty much finished although I was lazy at the end. It may be a bit uncomprehendable for sane minds so you have my forewarning. It may be a bit TOO crazy.

I am trying to make something more general tasting this time, so I am almost solely using 5cm/s as material.

Crazy: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=56tC2-kU6uc
Normal: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_3iwY0cwE44
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Re: Two WIPs (5cm/s and various)

Postby Warr3h » Tue Jan 29, 2013 1:35 pm

I'm working on a third one now.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lt-jJUcDsAw
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Re: Two WIPs (5cm/s and various)

Postby JaddziaDax » Wed Jan 30, 2013 6:11 pm

Burgertime Music Vid:
Weird, ART, and is there a point to the border around the video at the beginning making the resolution so small? Good timing.

5cm per second AMV
I liked the song, but I can't say I got into the amv, so far the beginning is not too bad, but it got a little boring near the end. A lot of nothing happening in this video. Also, I'd take out the "My Neighbor Totoro" clips because they don't really fit with the rest of it, unless you plan on doing more of a mix source video, the only other advice I have is that it might help if you made your clip resolutions all the same size, you can do this by cropping off the edges of one of the sources to fit the other, or by panning and scanning in your editing program (if your program has that ability). I understand that this is just an abandoned project, but those are my thoughts on it.

A trip to nowhere
Watermarks can often be a distraction. I like the editing in this clip a lot more. You should really try to finish stuff :P
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All in all interesting work, your videos are a little rough around the edges, but I think you have potential. You find some interesting music.
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Re: Two WIPs (5cm/s and various)

Postby Warr3h » Thu Jan 31, 2013 3:35 am

Thanks for your opinions. Yeah, I should really try finishing my stuff but I always get bored of a project so quickly that I jump to the next one.
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Re: Two WIPs (5cm/s and various)

Postby JaddziaDax » Thu Jan 31, 2013 10:36 am

I have a one video policy, I don't go on to the next video until I finish the last.
I've only dropped one video that I started.

Though I do know many people who work on multiple videos at a time.
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Re: Two WIPs (5cm/s and various)

Postby Warr3h » Fri Feb 01, 2013 9:26 am

I added some more content to the third vid. Should I continue like this instead? Im thinking about adding more scenes to my vids instead of adding massively long cut outs from animes. I can agree the second one may be a bit boring due to its slow paced nature but that was the point while making it. Didnt turn out to be very interested apparently, so Ill do it like most and increase the number of clips and add more effects, although I cant say Im very varied with it. But I will probably hit the nail with luck some day and pull off neat effects.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=03ijz-Ef9bo here it is. ^^
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