Domius wrote:I like so much the contrast between the 2 stories, i loved the colorations(especially the blue). It's a very good job, the masks are perfect and i enjoyed so much the scenes from 1:28 to 1:29, they're just EPIC
Cecco wrote:Good job pame!
ProjectBarcodeError wrote:i really liked the concept which combines aoi bungaku stories through the one with the writer. this idea is quite fresh.
therefore , two details :1- i think your choice to pick the lyrical version with the"serial killer" sequence don't fit at all, cause the song speaks about Europe wars and you make a character profile of a modern killer. it sounds very odd. but when he retries to write his novel, the other story fits a lot more. Maybe trying instrumental or having a more fitting anime for the first half would have been more appropriate.
2-Some cuts felt rough in manner of color difference. i would have prefered more fluid or innovative ways to change from the writer to the stories he writes. the concept made it possible, so it felt bit rushed in that matter.
to sum up, i found it like the ending: unfinished. but i had a good impression of what you wanted to try on this amv who is quite fine for the time you edited on it. i'll be glad to see your next one if you find the time to put all you want.
poke me on skype if you want more clarifications
AimoAio wrote:It was nicely edited but seemed to lack something, perhaps it was mostly to do with the ending where the guy just got up and left. But it was enjoyable and I like it. Reminds me a lot of The Stage but with a different, unique spin to it. Good job!
TritioAFB wrote:Look who's here o.o
While the series Aoi Bungaku needed attention in the past, the clip does its job showing the main elements of a part of the serie. Personally I like the combination and although I had my doubts about the ending, it still works. Good job Princess
[madaraxD] wrote:AS i told you in AMVArg, great job on this pame! nice concept here, good luck!
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