You can use the vidid tags to make typing that out a whole lot easier.
As for the video, I thought it was pretty nice. Slow at times with some scenes dragging on a tad long (like at 1:40), but you still managed to tell a story and show off Kirito. My biggest advice is to not use such long scenes in the future, and try and cut it up a bit more, and perhaps with a bit more sync on the beats/flow of the music. Lyrically, it matched, but a little more sync would have taken it over the top.
Some of the scenes also didn't make much sense to the story's chronological tale. Such as Kirito touching the memory sphere and moving directly into the boss battle. Some flashbacks during the fight of the memory sphere might have added to it a bit better. Still, had a nice dramatic element to it, and I liked watching it as a SAO fan.
That credits also made me tear up a bit.
So, yeah, I liked it..