Are you looking to announce this video or did you only want feedback? If you only want feedback, let me know and I'll move this to the opinion section of the forum.
Also, here are some quickie guides I made if you want to upload/announce your videos in the future:
How to Upload Your Video to AnimeMusicVideos.org: http://youtu.be/8fqnI-XmWuQ
How to Announce Your Video on the Forums: http://youtu.be/n5kfvcwRxt0
(You can still upload this video