This is one the source, yes so this is editingKinematics wrote:I've not seen the original, so I don't know if the psychedelic colors are part of the source or due to editing; I'm going to assume editing. Seemed to be well used as a way to emphasize the psychological aspect of the song.
The Quickening - Videos
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First of all, this isn't Sekirei, it's Freezing which is pretty much nothing but naked combat. And the shot at 1:54 is there for a specific reason. ("back" as in "baby got back", a bit of a stretch for a joke, but hopefully somebody gets it)Kinematics wrote: While I know Sekirei is well known for its fanservice shots, the panty shots at 0:55 and 1:54 just didn't seem to blend with the surrounding action...
Other than that I actually agree with most of your points. I had to make several concessions due to time restrictions and the lip sync in the beginning was done essentially from scratch right before the deadline.
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Had a feeling I should have looked up the name of the series instead of going by fuzzy memory. ("Always double check your sources.") :p Sorry for that flub.Copycat_Revolver wrote:First of all, this isn't Sekirei, it's Freezing which is pretty much nothing but naked combat.
And yes, I kinda got the sense that it was for that lyric match (though it took 2-3 watches before it really sunk in), but I was considering it more from the perspective of the video flow, where it was just dropped in in a way that didn't match what else was going on. There were a couple other jokes to match the lyrics, but they melded well with the video flow, so weren't an issue.Copycat_Revolver wrote:And the shot at 1:54 is there for a specific reason. ("back" as in "baby got back", a bit of a stretch for a joke, but hopefully somebody gets it)
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Yeah, lol, I pretty much agree with everything, especially with the last one. i.e. I wanted to focus on that story of losing control in jail but I guess I lost my main focus on the story or I couldn't find the right scenes?? Idk, but that was the part I was really struggling with was the later half. xD Anyway, thanks for your analysis, I'mma see if I can fix it up before I put it on the org. Also, That eye-removal surgery was totally necessary (Actually, I should've gotten rid of it)Kinematics wrote:[Lloyd9988] The Online AMV Iron Chef Tournament v4.0
Starts too early. Have a good 4 seconds of silence before the first rumble, probably shouldn't be more than 2.
Contrast/saturation levels at 0:23 are way too high.
Color tone impacts to match the beat from 0:25 onwards worked well, especially for transitioning to full color view for the video.
0:42-0:43 -- way too dark
Some ugly artifacting in 0:43-0:45 (possibly source?)
1:28 -- too bright
... I *really* coulda done without the eye removal surgery.. >.>
This video has a slightly different take on the "We're all here 'cause we lost control" portion of the lyric, where 'lost control' is past rather than present tense; ie: penance for past failure, rather than justification for current violence. However it only seems to hold onto that theme for a portion of the video, and falls back to the standard interpretation in the latter half. I think that split focus is what weakens your video the most, as there's not enough strength and focus in either half (after the introductory segments).
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argh lloyd, why you make this so hard
On the one hand, I think your video is clearly the weakest of the group purely on technical qualities. On the other hand, I thought your video was the best thought-out and best-matched as far as sources and atmosphere go. This made for some agonizing inner debate as far as judging.
Good luck to you, group. Results soon
On the one hand, I think your video is clearly the weakest of the group purely on technical qualities. On the other hand, I thought your video was the best thought-out and best-matched as far as sources and atmosphere go. This made for some agonizing inner debate as far as judging.
Good luck to you, group. Results soon
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- lloyd9988
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Because if it wasn't hard to judge, then I would've lost in Round 1. Actually. . . I still think I should've lost back then. Oh, question, can I see the score-sheet on technicalities?? I wanna see what I can do to fix my technical mistakes.Otohiko wrote:argh lloyd, why you make this so hard
On the one hand, I think your video is clearly the weakest of the group purely on technical qualities. On the other hand, I thought your video was the best thought-out and best-matched as far as sources and atmosphere go. This made for some agonizing inner debate as far as judging.
Good luck to you, group. Results soon
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Group G Round 2 videos are up!
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Glad to be done with this round ^^ I was hoping not to get a action song but atleast the song was pretty decent!
I have my doubts on on who will make it to the next round from the group so I shall now rename my video entry as:
Evangelion 4.44: You Can (Not) Quicken
I have my doubts on on who will make it to the next round from the group so I shall now rename my video entry as:
Evangelion 4.44: You Can (Not) Quicken
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YAYUHHH!!! DONE! With Round 2.
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Alright.
GROUP G TOTALLY ROCKS!
GROUP G TOTALLY ROCKS!