I am not sure how much the effort should be rated, mayor times even simple beat synch was missing, not to mention creative stuffs. There was though one part that really caught my attention 2:23 was so brilliant! I missed this kind of things from the rest of the video.
The colour contrast was too harsh, get a bit back from it, otherwise, the coloring gave a nice atmoshphere to it. I also liked your anime selection, they matched the video.
keep it up!