Gungrave - Last Bullet
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Gungrave - Last Bullet
by mxchibandit » Tue Mar 06, 2012 12:54 am
Feels good to finally get this out of my head. And this would also seem to be the first time The Murder of My Sweet's been used on this website, so here's to hoping I'll introduce them to some new fans.
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Re: Gungrave - Last Bullet
by Kairih » Tue Mar 06, 2012 7:47 am
Just gave you an opinion, it's all there! 
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Re: Gungrave - Last Bullet
by irriadin » Tue Mar 06, 2012 2:21 pm
Pretty good video! Solid editing, but there were a few things that could have been better.
For goodness sake, don't arbitrarily throw in lip-sync during just one scene of your action video. It was very out of place. Also, watch how literally you interpret the lyrics. The line about the "smoking gun" is shown on-screen by displaying the one guy smoking a cigar... which felt odd. Lastly, I felt that the pacing of the video could have been a bit faster.
Good job, overall, though.
For goodness sake, don't arbitrarily throw in lip-sync during just one scene of your action video. It was very out of place. Also, watch how literally you interpret the lyrics. The line about the "smoking gun" is shown on-screen by displaying the one guy smoking a cigar... which felt odd. Lastly, I felt that the pacing of the video could have been a bit faster.
Good job, overall, though.
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