DarkBox
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Shin-AMV
- Joined: Mon Mar 15, 2010 10:15 pm
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Re: DarkBox
That was pretty enjoyable. You had some good technique in a lot of areas, but I think some of the blur/smear transitions would have been more effective as something simpler like soft crossfades or even hard cuts. Not all of them, but some of them felt like they broke the flow of motion that was going on and had a jarring impact overall.
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lloyd9988
- Joined: Sun May 15, 2011 4:57 pm
- Location: AZ
Re: DarkBox
x2Shin-AMV wrote:That was pretty enjoyable. You had some good technique in a lot of areas, but I think some of the blur/smear transitions would have been more effective as something simpler like soft crossfades or even hard cuts. Not all of them, but some of them felt like they broke the flow of motion that was going on and had a jarring impact overall.
Too me, it felt like the effects were being over-used in some areas and concentration on the concept was kind of lost. But, again, good technique, as always Alien.
Also, ending song, is that the Gazettes?? xD
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alien762
- Joined: Tue Jul 13, 2010 8:44 am
Re: DarkBox
Thank you for the comments
In part, this amv, represent a small experiment to use some effects that i never used. I will take in mind the corrections for the next work
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Ending song isn't played by Gazette (if you intend the band). it is played by Nightmare (jpop of course).
In part, this amv, represent a small experiment to use some effects that i never used. I will take in mind the corrections for the next work
. Ending song isn't played by Gazette (if you intend the band). it is played by Nightmare (jpop of course).
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gotegenks
- Joined: Sat Oct 03, 2009 9:54 pm
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Re: DarkBox
x3Shin-AMV wrote:That was pretty enjoyable. You had some good technique in a lot of areas, but I think some of the blur/smear transitions would have been more effective as something simpler like soft crossfades or even hard cuts. Not all of them, but some of them felt like they broke the flow of motion that was going on and had a jarring impact overall.
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Emong
- A Damaged Lemon
- Joined: Fri Nov 10, 2006 12:02 pm
Re: DarkBox
It was enjoyable indeed. I didn't really mind the fade transitions. I just wished you used them more consistently, as in, similar fades more repetitively. Now some of them seemed a little random and misplaced.
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Kireblue
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Re: DarkBox
I think that you did a really good job at editing this. I'm just a little sad that I wasn't able to follow the plot at all. And since I haven't seen anything fro this anime source, I really had nothing to go on. But like I said before, your editing was really on point though.
